Make them do it - Comment fest!

[marguerite_26]

So what are you guys up for today? A little comment fest type thing?

The other day Hermette suggested a cliché fest based on the How to make Merlin/Arthur do it list. To which I said: YES! (because moar porn! *grabby hands*). Thank you to ella_bane, who agreed to be my co-host in this little fest. <3

Comments

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (3/4)

[kim47]

His lips were warm and solid and annoyingly perfect, much like Arthur himself, Merlin reflected, before kissing back enthusiastically, sliding his hands, still slick with ointment, up and around Arthur's neck. He felt rather than heard Arthur growl his approval at this, and responded with a light swipe of his tongue against Arthur's lips. Arthur's mouth opened immediately, coaxing Merlin's own open, and slipping his tongue in. Merlin moaned at the feel of it, drawing Arthur even closer to him, clinging with an almost embarrassing desperation. Arthur pushed him back gently, laying him down on the bed, and pulling Arthur to lie on top of him. The kisses grew faster and dirtier and messier, and Merlin almost
thought he could come just from this, Arthur's weight on top of him, his tongue, lips and teeth all assaulting Merlin's mouth, the heat and slickness and -

Arthur broke away suddenly and Merlin opened his eyes in protest. Arthur was resting on his forearms above Merlin, frowning at him.

"Why are you still wearing clothes?" he asked, sounding genuinely offended. Merlin would have laughed, except that taking off his clothes was clearly his best option here. He quickly pulled off his shirt and would have proceeded to his breeches if Arthur hadn't resumed biting at his lower lip, a hint of teeth, before soothing it with his tongue. The feeling of Arthur's chest hard against his own was wonderful, and he pressed his palms against Arthur's back, trying to extended the contact. It took a few minutes before they remembered what they had been doing.

"These. Off. Now," was all Arthur said, plucking uselessly at Merlin's breeches. Merlin shucked them rapidly, demanding,

"And yours."

Merlin dragged Arthur back on top of him, his hands everywhere, wanting to touch every inch of him at once. Arthur was mouthing at his neck, moaning softly as he rocked his hips into Merlin's. Merlin knew he wasn't going to last long, not when it felt like he was drowning in the sensation of having Arthur pressed up against him, his glorious, golden skin there for Merlin to touch. He pressed a kiss to Arthur's shoulder before working his hand between them, finally gripping Arthur's cock and stroking lightly. Arthur's hips jerked as he pushed into the touch, and Merlin stroked harder, amazed at the sensation of Arthur coming apart under his hands.

"Merlin, Merlin, yes, please, more, more," Arthur was gasping, becoming less coherent with each passing moment. Overcome with a sudden desire, Merlin released him, rolling them so he was on top of Arthur, straddling his thighs.

"Merlin, what - " Arthur got no further before Merlin slid down his body and, after pressing a light kiss to Arthur's hipbone, took him into his mouth. Arthur gasped, his hands scrabbling across the bed sheets, searching for something to cling to. Merlin reached up and caught his hand, bringing it to rest on top of Merlin's head. He pressed his other hand into Arthur's hip, attempting to still his jerking hips. Arthur seemed to approve of this plan, and he twisted his fingers in Merlin's hair, stroking almost tenderly.

Merlin hummed in contentment, working his lips up and down over Arthur. He'd never done this before, but knew what felt good. He increased the pace, and curled his tongue across the head of Arthur's cock, before pulling off completely to press wet, open mouthed kisses along the entire length. Arthur's grip in his hair tightened.

He returned to the tip, licking once before swallowing again and sucking hard, sending Arthur crashing over the edge with a shout that sounded suspiciously like Merlin's name. Merlin held him through it, swallowing it all, relishing the taste of Arthur in his mouth. He had barely had time to pull off and lick at his lips before Arthur was there, thrusting his tongue in his mouth, tasting himself, his sword hand hot and rough on Merlin's cock. Merlin almost yelped at suddenness of it, and it was only a few seconds before he was coming too, all over Arthur's hand and stomach.

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (4/4)

[kim47]

"Do you feel more relaxed now, sire?" he teased. A muffled grunt came from Arthur, followed by a chuckle.

"Oh, much. I think you'll have to do this every time I have a cramp."

After a few moments, Arthur got up and lurched away from the bed. Merlin started to protest, until he saw that Arthur was simply cleaning himself up. He watched with his mouth slightly open as Arthur ran a damp cloth over his chest and stomach. His cock twitched slightly at the sight.

Arthur made his way back onto the bed and lay down, practically pulling Merlin into his lap. He shoved his face into Merlin's neck, breathing into it, his breath tickling at Merlin's throat. Long, lazy moments passed, as they both grew drowsier and drowsier. Merlin waited until he was sure Arthur was asleep to whisper,

"You know, this would never happen if you just kept your damn shirt on."

He felt Arthur snort into his shoulder. Oh. Not so asleep then.

"In that case," Arthur mumbled, his voice thick, "remind me never to put on a shirt again."

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A/N: Oh, lord, I've never written anything above PG-13 before. Arthur being shirtless made me do it!

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (4/4)

[kim47]

Thanks! :)

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (4/4)

[natanilik]

Arthur being shirtles obviously has magical powers.

I aprove^^

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (4/4)

[kim47]

Obviously :)

♥

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (4/4)

[wanderhomeagain]

Arthur being shirtless is a perfect excuse for writing porn! That was fantastic! I knew there was a reason he always wandered around without a shirt on.

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (4/4)

[kim47]

THIS IS CANON, OKAY. He spends a lot of time with his shirt off, doesn't he? Well, I'm not complaining :)

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (4/4)

[marguerite_26]

just letting you know, I'm gathering up all the longer comment fics and printing them to read tonight. :)

So delighted you wrote for this! and yay! > pg-13

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (4/4)

[kim47]

Well, I hope you like it :) Once again written at about 3am, WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME.

♥ ♥ ♥

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (4/4)

[filmatleven]

Arthur grinned at him, a knowing, almost smug smile that Merlin had the strongest urge to kiss off his face. In fact, he had the strongest urge to kiss Arthur until he had forgotten how to be a prat entirely. It might take a long time, but Merlin was willing to put in the effort. It was for the public good, after all.

...One of the best paragraphs I've ever read! <3

Awesome story!

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (4/4)

[kim47]

Haha, thank you very much!

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (4/4)

[marguerite_26]

This was wonderful!!! Sweet and soooo sexy. Excellent job for your first bit of porn!!! *\o/*

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (4/4)

[kim47]

Thank you! ♥

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (4/4)

[joan_waterhouse]

Uuuh! Hot! Love the last line. ^_^

Re: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur being shirtless makes them do it (4/4)

[kim47]

Thank you :D