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[marcnolan]

Today I got up at 10:30, went to church, met Leah for lunch, went to the Cardinals game with Mike, dropped off a present to Ogre's, then came home for a barbeque with the family

Comments

[machination]

i like today's poem

[marcnolan]

I definitely like a lot about it, but it needs to be cleaned up a little bit in a few spots. Just not "sounding" right. The ideas are all there though.