rolling on ground i can't even ;A; this is so beautiful what are words
plot is perfectly paced and characters are just right and xiuhan so cute i'm dying ;u; your writing is beautiful! every little detail, every emotion that luhan goes through i can't i just. no. *___*
“Do you know why people say stargazing is like time traveling?” i really want to say that i love love love what you did with this line. it's such a breathtaking scene and xiuhan is so peaceful here, it's so beautiful to picture them like this outside of their busy idol schedules
“Ugh, my eyes.” Jongdae slips into the seat behind them. “No bro hugs in the van please.” i was literally seeing this scene and laughing in my head they're so cute this just SOUNDS LIKE THEM and i can't. i. no. teach me how you write these guys is there a secret formula (most likely no, but i like to imagine there is and you are secretly brewing them up among rainbow bubbles and sparkling foam)
There’s that weird feeling in his stomach again. Like a thousand butterflies are trapped inside. every description of luhan's nervousness is so real and so beautiful and i can literally see him like this so kudos to you for every single word of capturing his emotions because imo they were all amazing and lovely to read
cutting rant short here sorry for incoherencies ;u; ty for sharing this fic!
Thank you so much for your long and detailed comment! It makes me happy that you enjoyed my fic, especially my characterization of Xiuhan. I was very worried about how Luhan would come across. Your comment makes me feel relieved. Thanks again for reading!
plot is perfectly paced and characters are just right and xiuhan so cute i'm dying ;u; your writing is beautiful! every little detail, every emotion that luhan goes through i can't i just. no. *___*
“Do you know why people say stargazing is like time traveling?” i really want to say that i love love love what you did with this line. it's such a breathtaking scene and xiuhan is so peaceful here, it's so beautiful to picture them like this outside of their busy idol schedules
“Ugh, my eyes.” Jongdae slips into the seat behind them. “No bro hugs in the van please.” i was literally seeing this scene and laughing in my head they're so cute this just SOUNDS LIKE THEM and i can't. i. no. teach me how you write these guys is there a secret formula (most likely no, but i like to imagine there is and you are secretly brewing them up among rainbow bubbles and sparkling foam)
There’s that weird feeling in his stomach again. Like a thousand butterflies are trapped inside. every description of luhan's nervousness is so real and so beautiful and i can literally see him like this so kudos to you for every single word of capturing his emotions because imo they were all amazing and lovely to read
cutting rant short here sorry for incoherencies ;u; ty for sharing this fic!
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Thank you so much for your long and detailed comment! It makes me happy that you enjoyed my fic, especially my characterization of Xiuhan. I was very worried about how Luhan would come across. Your comment makes me feel relieved. Thanks again for reading!
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