My cousin's poem

[malisonlor]

This is my cousin's poem. I went over to her house and read it. She said it's a girl loosing someone she love. She never told him how much she loves him and now regrets it after he die.

Read it and please leave a comment . . . I know its not the best but please be nice. She wants to know if there are any improvement she should add.

Here it is:

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