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Last Man Standing Chapter 5

Feb 21, 2010 20:42

Title: Last Man Standing
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Benji/Joel
Summary: Benji challenges his other four band mates to test their 'prowess' in a contest. A lot of money is at stake and all five men are determined to win...just as long as no one EVER finds out...

And cue the Disclaimer: I don’t own or know the Madden twins. This never happened. I ( Read more... )

Comments 6

metalhead_00 February 22 2010, 03:10:53 UTC

Poor Joel :(

legna_angels February 22 2010, 05:34:41 UTC

*Sniff* I know.

lolarays_girl February 23 2010, 03:57:46 UTC

Benji needs to give Joel a hug.

legna_angels February 23 2010, 04:33:34 UTC

I agree :( But thanks for the rnr :D

writefiction March 13 2010, 16:14:35 UTC

How did I miss this?! Now I've read it and I hate Nicole. But Benji will make it all better. I know he will.

As far as the plot and characters I think you're doing a really good job. The plot definitely keeps me coming back for more :)

now I'm off to read the next chapter!!!!!!

legna_angels March 13 2010, 18:55:32 UTC

Glad you found it, lol! I purposely with held the name of Joel's girlfriend so that readers would draw their own conclusions as to her identity. Did the same with the kids but for a different reason: wanted to keep the focus on the guys. I found it a neat challenge to attempt to keep the plot centered and driven by the two main characters (the twins) and the three supporting ones (their band mates).

Thrilled you like it and that it is working :D