I'm gradually struggling through my
springtime_gen fic, which focuses on postwar Neville with a healthy side of Ron. I am terminally woolly-minded, though, and the story deals with fairly heavy moral issues - although I don't think it's a depressing story in itself, certainly not as angsty as some of the stuff I've produced recently. Does anyone feel like giving it a read-through and telling me when I or the characters are talking crap?
I should have something fit to send by Wednesday morning GMT, and would need it back within a couple of days, ideally. It's probably going to be about 5,000 words long. Any takers? (
luzdeestrellas, you are excused from this one, unless you desperately want to do it!)