[TLB4] The Last Bridge

[lykanion]

Title: The Last Bridge - Chapter 4
Word Count: 4609
Rating: PG
Pairing: Junhyung/Hyunseung
Summary: Two boys meet, each with their own problems. What path has life laid out for them?
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters.

Comments

[kurara_shikaze]

Omo omo! This place is for me *v*
UPDATEEE

[kurara_shikaze]

Yaahhh! I can finally give you a comment! Maybe less amazing than what you deserve but you already know how much I love this >w<

You are the master of lovely details!! I will never get tired to say it!! *///*
So Junnie makes Hyungie feel his 'defences' crumble a bit...I giggled when he put him on his mental friends list by Yoseob's side xD

Too bad, just TOO BAD that handing-phone person appeared. They were getting to somewhere, I could feel it >w<

Beaten up Junhyung going to Hyungie's house... I must say a loud thank youuu!! this is so intimate and a show of true trust -///-
Omg, and the nursing part? With all the striping jokes? So awesomeeee!
*imagines the wake up position*
I meeeeelt.

I wonder if your next writing cicle will come soon.
Luv it a lot ^o^

[lykanion]

Thank you soo much for your comment ~
I never understood how motivating comments can be ^^

But it seems I got a slight question along. Is the plot dragging on (too slow pace) or...? I don't know xD

[kurara_shikaze]

To tell the truth it's a good pace for me...but could be considered slow to some, for the complete descriptions and all. Though, I enjoy it.

Hope you keep your writing steem up! <3

[lykanion]

Oh well, I guess it's time to pick the pace up then ^^