[TLB4] The Last Bridge

[lykanion]

Title: The Last Bridge - Chapter 4
Word Count: 4609
Rating: PG
Pairing: Junhyung/Hyunseung
Summary: Two boys meet, each with their own problems. What path has life laid out for them?
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters.

Comments

[kurara_shikaze]

Omo omo! This place is for me *v*
UPDATEEE

[kurara_shikaze]

Yaahhh! I can finally give you a comment! Maybe less amazing than what you deserve but you already know how much I love this >w<

You are the master of lovely details!! I will never get tired to say it!! *///*
So Junnie makes Hyungie feel his 'defences' crumble a bit...I giggled when he put him on his mental friends list by Yoseob's side xD

Too bad, just TOO BAD that handing-phone person appeared. They were getting to somewhere, I could feel it >w<

Beaten up Junhyung going to Hyungie's house... I must say a loud thank youuu!! this is so intimate and a show of true trust -///-
Omg, and the nursing part? With all the striping jokes? So awesomeeee!
*imagines the wake up position*
I meeeeelt.

I wonder if your next writing cicle will come soon.
Luv it a lot ^o^

[lykanion]

Thank you soo much for your comment ~
I never understood how motivating comments can be ^^

But it seems I got a slight question along. Is the plot dragging on (too slow pace) or...? I don't know xD

[kurara_shikaze]

To tell the truth it's a good pace for me...but could be considered slow to some, for the complete descriptions and all. Though, I enjoy it.

Hope you keep your writing steem up! <3

[ext_503939]

...I don't know what to say. Maybe an "I love this fic very much!" will do? :333

Why are you frustrated with it? I like this chapter... :|

As much as I want to know what's with Junhyung(I'm so curious! >o<), I also want this fic to last(OMGOSH, I sound so selfish; please don't listen to me >,<).

'll be waiting for your update! :D

[lykanion]

Omo, thank you so much for the comment~

Frustrated because...I just...Can't bring myself to check the written text anymore, everything starts distracting me. Kinda difficult to explain ^^

But thank you so much for the comment <3

[akinoyui]

I'm so falling in love with this fic XD
I need to know what will Hyunseung do and what will happen to both of them. Junhyung being hurt.. ouch!!
Thanks for updating!

[lykanion]

Omg I so wanted to give that scene more depth but...I'm sorry I couldn't :X

Thank you for the comment <3

[cheecharon]

ok now my curiosity re junhyung's "work" has been greatly aroused by this chapter.
and seung's thoughts.. i love it. he seems so mature here :)
and omg i'm so sorry for saying this but somehow the pace is just.. a little slow? waaaaa.i know this is just me, so ignore me please ;__;
but like the others, i think i'm in love with this fic too.. i can't take it out of my system OTL
again, thanks for this!
/waits for the next part

[lykanion]

I hope it won't be disappointment when...the work thing isn't as interesting as it may seem lolol :X

Hmm, slow? Maybe. I guess I should read it through myself and see then. It really may be so but...I don't know xD

Thank youu <3

[vennarashii]

I JUST READ THE WHOLE SERIES. gaaah loving it. it's not like other stories where hyunseung (or the main character) automatically shows signs of attraction to the other guy. you made it really slow and nice and steady. aww. look at seungie drifting away in junhyung's world now #incoherent #please ignore me

but anyway, i love this!~ will sooo be waiting for updates. JUNSEUNG♥

[lykanion]

Again the word 'slow' xD
I don't know. Should I make it develop faster? I'm kinda getting confused xD

Thank you for the comment <3