Beta?
Hello all!
I'm putting the finishing touches on my very first LuRe ficlet, and I've had two people take a look, which has helped immensely. But I'm neurotic about shit like this, and I'd love it if I could get one more person to give it a read (I actually had to take care not to type R-E-I-D there, ha) and tell me if the boys are in character and the story makes sense and such.
It's fairly short - less than 2000 words - and regretfully non-smutty (I'm so sorry, glancast, I tried, but I just can't write them like that. Yet.), so it shouldn't take too long to give it a going over.
Help? Pwease?
I'm putting the finishing touches on my very first LuRe ficlet, and I've had two people take a look, which has helped immensely. But I'm neurotic about shit like this, and I'd love it if I could get one more person to give it a read (I actually had to take care not to type R-E-I-D there, ha) and tell me if the boys are in character and the story makes sense and such.
It's fairly short - less than 2000 words - and regretfully non-smutty (I'm so sorry, glancast, I tried, but I just can't write them like that. Yet.), so it shouldn't take too long to give it a going over.
Help? Pwease?