Comments | lunaspec_gimmy: Painted Face-Rayne Fall Challenge 2009

lunaspec_gimmy

Painted Face-Rayne Fall Challenge 2009

Nov 05, 2009 21:49

This is a 100 word drabble written or the Rayne Fall Challenge on Copper For A Kiss, for the prompt 'Costume'. I hope some of you enjoy, feedback appreciated.

( Fic under the cut )

rayne, prompt costume, fic

Comments 12

rjsteamboat76 November 5 2009, 23:31:11 UTC

oh. very nice. =)

lunaspec_gimmy November 6 2009, 06:53:50 UTC

Thank you!

idyllictorture November 6 2009, 04:01:37 UTC

Beautiful. I loved this. I love drabbles that are exactly 100 words (the true drabble). And this is a great example of one. I'm thinking it's one of the best ones I've read, in any fandom.

lunaspec_gimmy November 6 2009, 06:54:29 UTC

Thanks, I fiddled around with the sentences for ages trying to make it exact! Glad to know you think it paid off.

willow_reece November 6 2009, 07:15:01 UTC

This is beautiful. I could easily see River stealing Inara's makeup in an effort to gain Jayne's attention. Your descriptions are perfect. =)

lunaspec_gimmy November 6 2009, 18:03:48 UTC

Thank you! I loved your challenge responses when I saw them recently so props to you as well.

willow_reece November 6 2009, 22:08:34 UTC

Thank you! ♥

seekingalmonds November 6 2009, 17:36:03 UTC

I like it, and I barely even know what it's about :).

You must really show me the end of Serenity sometime...

lunaspec_gimmy November 7 2009, 11:58:19 UTC

Hey M!
I really must. I still can't believe we had to finish at twenty minutes before the end.

seekingalmonds November 7 2009, 22:48:14 UTC

:) Doing anything next weekend?

matchlightfire November 7 2009, 11:45:42 UTC

oh, it's so sad and beautiful...just like River. I love this!

lunaspec_gimmy November 7 2009, 11:57:31 UTC

Thanks!