Name: Kiku Livejournal Username: sheiji E-mail: sheirazsora@yahoo.com AIM/MSN: AIM-kikutsune | Y!M- sheirazsora Current Characters at Luceti: N/A
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Name: Kyle Dunamis Fandom: Tales of Destiny 2 Gender: Male Age: 15 Time Period: When time traveled to Aethersphere (Stahn's timeline). Wing Color: Emerald. History: Tales of Destiny 2
PersonalityKyle has simple personality as much alike to his father, Stahn. Although he doesn't know how his father looks like, people who close to Stahn could recognize Kyle because the way he acts and thinks, which similar to Stahn's. Kyle is straightforward mind and sometimes curious. Since he met Reala at Ruin of Laguna and said that she looking for a hero, Kyle didn't hesitate to tell her that he was the one who looking for. When Reala rejected him and left, Kyle claimed that he's going for adventure to seek as a hero
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First Person: Why didn't Reala ever tell me about facing the consequences before transporting to this timeline? She just made me bump my head on the ground again. Can’t blame how foolish I am. Idiocy in my head can’t be fixed, unless there's a miracle could turn me into a genius.
[Slowly gets up and stands with his two feet.]
I managed to get here somehow, but where is everybody? Don’t tell me we got separated like last time! Wandering around the forest all by myself could be dangerous. I should get ready before--what? My sword’s gone! Oh no… where did I drop it?
[Checks back once more.]
…Wings? Wow, they look cool. They match my back perfectly…
Wait a minute. I don’t have time for this! I need to find the others! A hero would never leave his comrades behind when they need one.
Uhh... which way should I go?
Third PersonA spiky blond boy gazed up into a ray of light. For a moment, he felt the hot sun on his face before he looked down back and figured out that he was standing
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Name: Kiku
Livejournal Username: sheiji
E-mail: sheirazsora@yahoo.com
AIM/MSN: AIM-kikutsune | Y!M- sheirazsora
Current Characters at Luceti: N/A
Character
Name: Kyle Dunamis
Fandom: Tales of Destiny 2
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Time Period: When time traveled to Aethersphere (Stahn's timeline).
Wing Color: Emerald.
History: Tales of Destiny 2
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First Person:
Why didn't Reala ever tell me about facing the consequences before transporting to this timeline? She just made me bump my head on the ground again. Can’t blame how foolish I am. Idiocy in my head can’t be fixed, unless there's a miracle could turn me into a genius.
[Slowly gets up and stands with his two feet.]
I managed to get here somehow, but where is everybody? Don’t tell me we got separated like last time! Wandering around the forest all by myself could be dangerous. I should get ready before--what? My sword’s gone! Oh no… where did I drop it?
[Checks back once more.]
…Wings? Wow, they look cool. They match my back perfectly…
Wait a minute. I don’t have time for this! I need to find the others! A hero would never leave his comrades behind when they need one.
Uhh... which way should I go?
Third PersonA spiky blond boy gazed up into a ray of light. For a moment, he felt the hot sun on his face before he looked down back and figured out that he was standing ( ... )
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