Personality: Kyle has simple personality as much alike to his father, Stahn. Although he doesn't know how his father looks like, people who close to Stahn could recognize Kyle because the way he acts and thinks, which similar to Stahn's. Kyle is straightforward mind and sometimes curious. Since he met Reala at Ruin of Laguna and said that she looking for a hero, Kyle didn't hesitate to tell her that he was the one who looking for. When Reala rejected him and left, Kyle claimed that he's going for adventure to seek as a hero.
There's some part that Kyle is really optimistic, cheerful and trusts people such as strangers, which they end up becoming one of his friends. This shown when he and Loni were imprison in the same cell with a masked man, Judas (which Kyle named him later). Judas agreed to free them and Loni warned Kyle not to believe him because he must be up to something. Kyle trusted Judas and said if they continued to stay, Reala would be too far to catch up.
Kyle also has a sense of wanting to help people without thinking even though he is quite brave as a young boy. He accepts people need without knowing what dangers may lays on him. This makes Loni worries about him because Kyle isn't mature enough. To Kyle, friends are the most value to him after parents. He's a very loyal person and would risk his life protecting people he cares about.
Strengths: PHYSICAL: Kyle is a swordsman, which learned from Rutee and Stahn. But his battle style almost to Stahn's. He is quite skillful by using swords, axes and as well as basic magic spells. With his slender body, Kyle is very considerable on speed (Reala once told him that he ran too fast) and swift combo attacking.
MENTAL: Very loyal and helpful when others need help but sometimes he is quite stubborn whatever dangerous they are. He follows his instinct rather than think before he decides anything. Sometimes Loni puzzles what Kyle thinks, but it may lead them to good or bad.
EMOTIONAL: Kyle cares his comrades as his friends. Whenever his friends are in trouble, he tries his best to cheer them up. Although Kyle hardly shows being emotional to others, he is much being a cheerful type which makes him really quick to make friends.
Weaknesses: PHYSICAL: Kyle is a sleepy head and hardly to wakes up even the sound of explosion, unless you make a loud sound of clanging pan. He also sometimes sleeps late at night because thinking too much questions and problems. In battles, Kyle mostly useless in magic because he is more often in physical attacks.
MENTAL: He is easily to take lies and to toy with. Judas sometimes teases Kyle being an idiot, and Loni angers back on Judas. Kyle is also forgets the certain part or the main point such as if he been told there's a party tomorrow, he will forgets at the next day unless someone reminds him. The unreasonable cause is, he carelessly letting his head knocked off for few times. But according to Loni, Kyle is an idiot and forgetful since birth.
EMOTIONAL: As been said, Kyle is hardly shows being emotional except if he's been scold or words that lets him down. Kyle was raised with care of Rutee and Loni, so Kyle easily shows his sad face or by run away from them. This also shown when Kyle asked Rutee's permission on journey and she denied. Another part where Judas told him, people from the castle acknowledged Kyle as 'Stahn's son' rather than Kyle himself. He is very value to his friends, losing them makes him really desperate and feeling guilty.
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First Person: Why didn't Reala ever tell me about facing the consequences before transporting to this timeline? She just made me bump my head on the ground again. Can’t blame how foolish I am. Idiocy in my head can’t be fixed, unless there's a miracle could turn me into a genius.
[Slowly gets up and stands with his two feet.]
I managed to get here somehow, but where is everybody? Don’t tell me we got separated like last time! Wandering around the forest all by myself could be dangerous. I should get ready before--what? My sword’s gone! Oh no… where did I drop it?
[Checks back once more.]
…Wings? Wow, they look cool. They match my back perfectly…
Wait a minute. I don’t have time for this! I need to find the others! A hero would never leave his comrades behind when they need one.
Uhh... which way should I go?
Third Person: A spiky blond boy gazed up into a ray of light. For a moment, he felt the hot sun on his face before he looked down back and figured out that he was standing somewhere in the forest. It wasn’t the first time he was separated from his companion due to time traveling to the past. He remembered he had Reala by his side soon after he gained consciousness. But this was much different from before; he was alone, unarmed.
Kyle Dunamis, a boy who was born from two unforgettable heroes. He highly respected his father, although he couldn’t remember what his father looked like. But one thing that Kyle made sure to do was memorize his favorite phrase, “Believe in one and another.”, which made Kyle eager to see his father’s face at least once. Coincidentally, he had one last chance to witness his father while he was still alive and entitled as the future hero.
Inspecting the situation that he was having now, he figured out that this obviously wasn’t in Aethersphere. He was expecting to face his worst enemy, but this wasn’t the right place. Could it be that Reala had no energy left to transport them to Aethersphere? It did make sense. Still, the wings on his back were puzzling him and he had no idea why he had them.
Then, he took a breath as he tried to clear his mind. He once remembered his father’s words, ”Never give up, there always must be a way.” and he held tight to that phrase. He bent down and picked up a long, broken tree limb, long enough for self defense. The first thing he needed to do was find the others, who he trusted for the whole journey. They could be around somewhere not far away. If there was no luck, he would take the second choice: find any empty spot or a place he could camp before the sun went down.
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Kyle has simple personality as much alike to his father, Stahn. Although he doesn't know how his father looks like, people who close to Stahn could recognize Kyle because the way he acts and thinks, which similar to Stahn's. Kyle is straightforward mind and sometimes curious. Since he met Reala at Ruin of Laguna and said that she looking for a hero, Kyle didn't hesitate to tell her that he was the one who looking for. When Reala rejected him and left, Kyle claimed that he's going for adventure to seek as a hero.
There's some part that Kyle is really optimistic, cheerful and trusts people such as strangers, which they end up becoming one of his friends. This shown when he and Loni were imprison in the same cell with a masked man, Judas (which Kyle named him later). Judas agreed to free them and Loni warned Kyle not to believe him because he must be up to something. Kyle trusted Judas and said if they continued to stay, Reala would be too far to catch up.
Kyle also has a sense of wanting to help people without thinking even though he is quite brave as a young boy. He accepts people need without knowing what dangers may lays on him. This makes Loni worries about him because Kyle isn't mature enough. To Kyle, friends are the most value to him after parents. He's a very loyal person and would risk his life protecting people he cares about.
Strengths:
PHYSICAL:
Kyle is a swordsman, which learned from Rutee and Stahn. But his battle style almost to Stahn's. He is quite skillful by using swords, axes and as well as basic magic spells. With his slender body, Kyle is very considerable on speed (Reala once told him that he ran too fast) and swift combo attacking.
MENTAL:
Very loyal and helpful when others need help but sometimes he is quite stubborn whatever dangerous they are. He follows his instinct rather than think before he decides anything. Sometimes Loni puzzles what Kyle thinks, but it may lead them to good or bad.
EMOTIONAL:
Kyle cares his comrades as his friends. Whenever his friends are in trouble, he tries his best to cheer them up. Although Kyle hardly shows being emotional to others, he is much being a cheerful type which makes him really quick to make friends.
Weaknesses:
PHYSICAL:
Kyle is a sleepy head and hardly to wakes up even the sound of explosion, unless you make a loud sound of clanging pan. He also sometimes sleeps late at night because thinking too much questions and problems. In battles, Kyle mostly useless in magic because he is more often in physical attacks.
MENTAL:
He is easily to take lies and to toy with. Judas sometimes teases Kyle being an idiot, and Loni angers back on Judas. Kyle is also forgets the certain part or the main point such as if he been told there's a party tomorrow, he will forgets at the next day unless someone reminds him. The unreasonable cause is, he carelessly letting his head knocked off for few times. But according to Loni, Kyle is an idiot and forgetful since birth.
EMOTIONAL:
As been said, Kyle is hardly shows being emotional except if he's been scold or words that lets him down. Kyle was raised with care of Rutee and Loni, so Kyle easily shows his sad face or by run away from them. This also shown when Kyle asked Rutee's permission on journey and she denied. Another part where Judas told him, people from the castle acknowledged Kyle as 'Stahn's son' rather than Kyle himself. He is very value to his friends, losing them makes him really desperate and feeling guilty.
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First Person:
Why didn't Reala ever tell me about facing the consequences before transporting to this timeline? She just made me bump my head on the ground again. Can’t blame how foolish I am. Idiocy in my head can’t be fixed, unless there's a miracle could turn me into a genius.
[Slowly gets up and stands with his two feet.]
I managed to get here somehow, but where is everybody? Don’t tell me we got separated like last time! Wandering around the forest all by myself could be dangerous. I should get ready before--what? My sword’s gone! Oh no… where did I drop it?
[Checks back once more.]
…Wings? Wow, they look cool. They match my back perfectly…
Wait a minute. I don’t have time for this! I need to find the others! A hero would never leave his comrades behind when they need one.
Uhh... which way should I go?
Third Person:
A spiky blond boy gazed up into a ray of light. For a moment, he felt the hot sun on his face before he looked down back and figured out that he was standing somewhere in the forest. It wasn’t the first time he was separated from his companion due to time traveling to the past. He remembered he had Reala by his side soon after he gained consciousness. But this was much different from before; he was alone, unarmed.
Kyle Dunamis, a boy who was born from two unforgettable heroes. He highly respected his father, although he couldn’t remember what his father looked like. But one thing that Kyle made sure to do was memorize his favorite phrase, “Believe in one and another.”, which made Kyle eager to see his father’s face at least once. Coincidentally, he had one last chance to witness his father while he was still alive and entitled as the future hero.
Inspecting the situation that he was having now, he figured out that this obviously wasn’t in Aethersphere. He was expecting to face his worst enemy, but this wasn’t the right place. Could it be that Reala had no energy left to transport them to Aethersphere? It did make sense. Still, the wings on his back were puzzling him and he had no idea why he had them.
Then, he took a breath as he tried to clear his mind. He once remembered his father’s words, ”Never give up, there always must be a way.” and he held tight to that phrase. He bent down and picked up a long, broken tree limb, long enough for self defense. The first thing he needed to do was find the others, who he trusted for the whole journey. They could be around somewhere not far away. If there was no luck, he would take the second choice: find any empty spot or a place he could camp before the sun went down.
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