[Legend of Sun Knight] Sweetness Mixed with Dread

Apr 01, 2011 00:37

...failed. XD; (It's past midnight now) But oh well, I'll continue poking at these... though I don't know if I'll crosspost them. =x

Also, this one didn't actually take an hour to write. XD; (had other stuff to do).

Title: Sweetness Mixed with Dread
Day/Theme: 13. It’s all sweetness mixed with dread
Series: The Legend of Sun Knight
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the legend of sun knight, fic type: drabbles, writing community: 31_days

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darkicedragon April 1 2011, 20:29:57 UTC
"The most vexing thing about Sun was that he never spoke in direct words and his expressions never revealed what he truly thought either"
Pfft. This. XDD

"started Sun, wide smile stretching across his face even though surely there was nothing to smile about, not when it was a sweltering 43 °C outside, yet they were still clothed in a million layers because everyone knew that was what the Holy Knights wore (Judgment probably had it the worst with his wardrobe dominated by nothing but black and more black)."
Aaaaaaaah! *points and flails* Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!! It kept going and going! 43 degrees! They can't take off their uniform! Judgemeeeeeeent! D: Poor all of them!
(Ice is probably okay because he's wearing white and he can create ice. He's probably the most popular person right now. XD)

XDD Nooooo~ They have a parade to go to!

"when in reality, Sun was just making sure everyone would be just as miserable as him."
XD I laughed out loud.

"When Storm walked away after the speech Sun had so painstakingly crafted as if he hadn't heard ( ... )

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lucathia_rykatu April 2 2011, 02:22:34 UTC
I like that about Sun. XDD

Ahaha, that sentence got so long. *looks at the paragraph* That paragraph was actually only two sentences long. Judgment and his black robes... gosh, I hope he doesn't faint. But Ice would probably help him out. XD Ice sure would have it a lot better than everyone else. :3

I need some nice cool breeze at the moment. XD It's getting hot in my house!

The sweetness mixed with dread part was supposed to refer to how Sun appears sweet but always makes people feel dread... but somehow that kind of fell flat. XD;

Sun might take revenge by helping everyone out with a small breeze but Storm. XD;; I wonder if Storm knows any elemental magic.

The comment was huge for a short drabble. XD

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darkicedragon April 5 2011, 05:09:56 UTC
XD I don't when I'm writing him talking with someone! That's why I have at least one wip, because I couldn't figure out how to translate our language into his speech! XD;;

XDD; We've been having a mix of good weather and then heavy rain.

Pfft. Storm totally feels dread when he sees Sun! (the language! I don't understand what he's saying! The paperwork.)

"Sun might take revenge by helping everyone out with a small breeze but Storm."
XD Awww.

"I wonder if Storm knows any elemental magic."
...Water and lightning? That's what I'd expect if he did have magic anyway.

*Snerk* My comment was over two-hundred words long. But I was quoting, so that makes it okay! *nods*

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lucathia_rykatu April 7 2011, 01:36:50 UTC
Haha, and that's why Storm stopped listening. XD I didn't want to write more of Sun's painfully crafted speech. XDDD Oh, you have a WIP with Sun?

Ahh, well, it was really cold last last weekend, then we had a heat wave, and now it's getting cold again. It's like the weather can't make up its mind.

Hm, I wonder what Storm dislikes more, Sun's speech, or Sun's paperwork. XD;

Ah~, yeah, water and lightning sounds like something that might fit Storm... lightning would be cool. XD But that's "Storm" in English. His name in Chinese (the literal meaning) is more like Violent Wind... so now that I think about it, I guess... wind? :3

Quoting in huge chunks. XDD My sentences were long...

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