[Legend of Sun Knight] Sweetness Mixed with Dread

Apr 01, 2011 00:37

...failed. XD; (It's past midnight now) But oh well, I'll continue poking at these... though I don't know if I'll crosspost them. =x

Also, this one didn't actually take an hour to write. XD; (had other stuff to do).

Title: Sweetness Mixed with Dread
Day/Theme: 13. It’s all sweetness mixed with dread
Series: The Legend of Sun Knight
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the legend of sun knight, fic type: drabbles, writing community: 31_days

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darkicedragon April 1 2011, 20:29:57 UTC
"The most vexing thing about Sun was that he never spoke in direct words and his expressions never revealed what he truly thought either"
Pfft. This. XDD

"started Sun, wide smile stretching across his face even though surely there was nothing to smile about, not when it was a sweltering 43 °C outside, yet they were still clothed in a million layers because everyone knew that was what the Holy Knights wore (Judgment probably had it the worst with his wardrobe dominated by nothing but black and more black)."
Aaaaaaaah! *points and flails* Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!! It kept going and going! 43 degrees! They can't take off their uniform! Judgemeeeeeeent! D: Poor all of them!
(Ice is probably okay because he's wearing white and he can create ice. He's probably the most popular person right now. XD)

XDD Nooooo~ They have a parade to go to!

"when in reality, Sun was just making sure everyone would be just as miserable as him."
XD I laughed out loud.

"When Storm walked away after the speech Sun had so painstakingly crafted as if he hadn't heard a single word"
*laughs more*

"He'd been trying to tell Storm in a roundabout way (because the Sun Knight wasn't supposed to know magic) that he could perform a small wind spell to cool them down during the parade, but did Storm listen?"
D'aaaaaaw! *laughs even more* But if Sun isn't supposed to know magic, then Storm would disregard any hints Sun tried to give him about it anyway!

(This comment looks huge XD;)

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lucathia_rykatu April 2 2011, 02:22:34 UTC
I like that about Sun. XDD

Ahaha, that sentence got so long. *looks at the paragraph* That paragraph was actually only two sentences long. Judgment and his black robes... gosh, I hope he doesn't faint. But Ice would probably help him out. XD Ice sure would have it a lot better than everyone else. :3

I need some nice cool breeze at the moment. XD It's getting hot in my house!

The sweetness mixed with dread part was supposed to refer to how Sun appears sweet but always makes people feel dread... but somehow that kind of fell flat. XD;

Sun might take revenge by helping everyone out with a small breeze but Storm. XD;; I wonder if Storm knows any elemental magic.

The comment was huge for a short drabble. XD

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darkicedragon April 5 2011, 05:09:56 UTC
XD I don't when I'm writing him talking with someone! That's why I have at least one wip, because I couldn't figure out how to translate our language into his speech! XD;;

XDD; We've been having a mix of good weather and then heavy rain.

Pfft. Storm totally feels dread when he sees Sun! (the language! I don't understand what he's saying! The paperwork.)

"Sun might take revenge by helping everyone out with a small breeze but Storm."
XD Awww.

"I wonder if Storm knows any elemental magic."
...Water and lightning? That's what I'd expect if he did have magic anyway.

*Snerk* My comment was over two-hundred words long. But I was quoting, so that makes it okay! *nods*

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lucathia_rykatu April 7 2011, 01:36:50 UTC
Haha, and that's why Storm stopped listening. XD I didn't want to write more of Sun's painfully crafted speech. XDDD Oh, you have a WIP with Sun?

Ahh, well, it was really cold last last weekend, then we had a heat wave, and now it's getting cold again. It's like the weather can't make up its mind.

Hm, I wonder what Storm dislikes more, Sun's speech, or Sun's paperwork. XD;

Ah~, yeah, water and lightning sounds like something that might fit Storm... lightning would be cool. XD But that's "Storm" in English. His name in Chinese (the literal meaning) is more like Violent Wind... so now that I think about it, I guess... wind? :3

Quoting in huge chunks. XDD My sentences were long...

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darkicedragon April 11 2011, 13:28:09 UTC
I haaave... one wip where Sun and Judgement are having a conversation, 'A day in the life of Roland' XD;, and another OC narrative fic. The last one probably won't be written because it's stated pretty explicitly what happened (the pushing people off the side of a cliff fic).

We've been getting double-digit temperature recently (mid-fifties-ish) and we're not used to it. XDD;; It's so nice and warm! And so's the wind! (*laughs* You must think we're so weird)

At least the paperwork should be relatively straightforward? Unless he has to write it in Sun's script/language. ... o_______o;;; Ouuuuch.

XD Makes sense.

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lucathia_rykatu April 12 2011, 07:25:32 UTC
Ah. XD; Bad Sun for rendering the WIP a WIP! XD; Hm, yeah, I think the pushing people off the side of a cliff was explained more by Adair too?

Mid-fifties, and you think you're warm!! =P We got a heat wave last week. Had temperatures in the high 70's, low 80's. I thought Spring was finally here. XD; And now we're back in the 60's, which means shivering for me. =P

I see you wrote a ficlet about Storm doing paperwork. Poor Storm. XD;

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darkicedragon April 12 2011, 13:13:45 UTC
Maybe I should just stick them in Sun's bedroom instead of...wherever they were standing in the fic. XD

Totally!!

D: D: Waaaah, that temperature's nice, but only in small bursts! *blink* That's Spring temperature for you? D: D:!

XDD

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lucathia_rykatu April 13 2011, 06:31:14 UTC
...at first, I couldn't figure out why you thought putting them in Sun's bedroom would help. XDD But yeah, you should have them have easy to understand conversations instead of convoluted ones with lots of hidden meanings from time to time. XDD (But then we have Sun going, "And then I'm going to get mad!" Or something like that... childish Sun coming out to play?)

Ahaha, yeah, nice, cool, Spring temperature. XD; How do you fare in hot weather? How hot does it get in the summers?

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darkicedragon April 15 2011, 19:19:29 UTC
Haha, I guess childish Sun would be fun to write as well. XD

:P Nice, cool Spring temperature for us is about...50? Our extreme heat wave a couple of years ago about 80. I think our summers are normally about low seventies. So your summers are normally about high eighties then?

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lucathia_rykatu April 18 2011, 23:25:12 UTC
80 is an extreme heat wave!? Your summers are cold. XD; I can never get over that. Yeah, summers are around high eighties, low nineties, and then we usually have a few days when we get into the high nineties/low hundreds and die of heat. XD;

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