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Aug 01, 2006 00:31

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angst, crowley, drabble, gen, fic

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dastier July 31 2006, 23:04:50 UTC
it's how it all builds up, sentence by sentence, into a heavy mass of proof, only to be shattered by the single last line O_o *is v. impressed*

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gantar August 1 2006, 13:05:41 UTC
I'm v. happy that you're v. impressed :D

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bs_cs August 1 2006, 02:30:24 UTC
^oo^ That was so great!
Here I am going "Aw, that's kind of sad." and then -BAM- you hit me with that last line XD
So~spiffy~

Off Topic: I really like your profile bio too =)

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gantar August 1 2006, 13:10:32 UTC
Thanks! :D (And as for the profile bios, yours is very nice, too :D)

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blueeyedtigress August 1 2006, 03:23:54 UTC
What I thought, while reading this, was something along the lines of, "Oh, okay. Nice turn of phrase. Oh, dear, someone who doesn't grok Crowley at all. I see where this is going, um .... Oh. No, I didn't! I was wrong, good ... *grin* ... a nice twist at the end!"

A carefully-laid argument with a lovely little loophole. Very nicely done. ;]

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gantar August 1 2006, 13:16:51 UTC
Hee, that's what I meant, to make everyone think they know where this is going :p
Thank you, I'm very happy you liked it :)

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supernerdteru August 2 2006, 06:21:11 UTC
It's like a Shakespearian sonnet--a big long buildup with a concise, clever, and funny punch at the end.

Blahaha... cute! ^_^

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gantar August 2 2006, 08:43:04 UTC
Thanks :) Wow, I'm compared to Shakespeare :P ;D

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io_aenaria August 3 2006, 02:15:49 UTC
Amazing. Simply amazing. It's an emotional sucker punch, but then that last line comes in, and I gasped, laughed, and realized once more (and maybe more than I ever have in my many re-reads of GO) just how atypical and wonderful Crowley is. The concise writing and sharp lines added to that as well. Thank you for the excellent read. This one's definitely going in my memories. :)

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gantar August 3 2006, 09:44:31 UTC
Thank you :D I'm happy you liked it so much :D

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