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mjacton March 26 2011, 16:31:24 UTC
End? If that's the end, the sequel in my head is happy.

Aside from some distracting preposition issues, this is really good.

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lovetestimonial March 26 2011, 16:39:17 UTC
thank you!

and yes, I believe the term "grammatically inept" has been directed to me by my English teacher a few times :)

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malexfaith March 27 2011, 00:11:36 UTC
Love the banter. Please continue. Thanks heaps for sharing

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ayden07 March 27 2011, 05:11:57 UTC
this was awesome!! do you have a sequel in mind? in any case, love this, it has this flow that feels like it could end up in hijinks and break-ups (for Finn). good job

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