Fic
Title: Just by Touch
Fandom::Bleach
Rating: R porn
Summary: Orihime is determined to show Ulquiorra that as much as she is suspectable to his touch, that he as is with hers.
Character(s): Ulquiorra x Orihime.
Warnings: none
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Kubo Tite
Bete'd: none
Chapters: 1
Notes: This was written for my friend frotu's birthday. <3 Much ( Read more... )
Fandom::Bleach
Rating: R porn
Summary: Orihime is determined to show Ulquiorra that as much as she is suspectable to his touch, that he as is with hers.
Character(s): Ulquiorra x Orihime.
Warnings: none
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Kubo Tite
Bete'd: none
Chapters: 1
Notes: This was written for my friend frotu's birthday. <3 Much ( Read more... )
First, the whole premise. Orihime trying to get on an even footing with him on a subject like that? Awesome. It's so in keeping with her tendency to stand up to him and be bolder around him, and the fact that it's over a subject like THAT is a nice thing to see from her. And then all of her introspection and consideration about the issue, too... so great. Having some sort of logical lead up to the events in the rest of the story was great. ^__^b
And you know how much I LOOOOOVED their dialogue. I dunno, moments like that might be my favorite. Just them talking things out... ugh, and the ease between them too. <3 You really got their relationship across so nicely in that.
AND AND you got so many of the things I like in! *___* Buahahaha the hollow hole business... I'm glad you had Orihime find something so that she could even the playing field between them. That was a really nice way to do it B)
Well, there are probably other things I could say... or maybe not. I'm not sure if I'd be able to express them. u///u But I really appreciated and enjoyed my gift! *HUG* THANK YOU SO MUCH! T^T
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