BLACK DAY 1: an argument against constructionism

Apr 01, 2013 08:09

Title: an argument against constructionism
Written by: tigersharks
A remix of " this town ain't big enough!" by colorfunk
Pairing: Sehun/Lu Han
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: Sehun has an identity crisis.

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pairing: sehun/lu han, black day, rating: pg

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tigersharks April 18 2013, 14:13:27 UTC

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anonymous April 1 2013, 19:35:59 UTC
ahh i love this so much!!! the brisk kind of clinical mood is so well suited, and i love that it's framed as a flashback with the characters coming across more mature/jaded and like, detached from each other, so even before the rejection it's what you're expecting (love that scene, then pretended to fall asleep oof). and the part about assumptions, how sehun doesn't actually know much about luhan at all, ouch. i think this is my favorite: "Same," Lu Han said, "but I think you've seen much more than I have." He looked sorry. / "Don't try to read my mind, it creeps me the hell out," Sehun lied. bc augh so great (he lied!), the sense of regret (except not even regret, like a stale sort of nostalgia??) that runs through in a rly muted way, bc running away honestly would've been rash and naive and in the end sehun manages to grow up and into his sme role on his own. but still ouch ( ... )

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colorfunk April 16 2013, 03:38:44 UTC
coming back to tell you again how much i super enjoyed this remix, ty so much for writing!! ♥

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existandexhaust December 5 2013, 04:26:04 UTC
there's something bittersweet about the whole thing, and i like it. it's a lot more realistic. and agh, my hunhan feels are just going off like crazzyyy...

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