Inception: Suddenly My Eyes are Open

[xheartrockx]

Title: Suddenly My Eyes are Open
Pairings or Characters: Arthur/Eames
Genre: a bit of fluff and porn
Kinks: -
Setting: picks up where the movie left off
Summary: Arthur found the key card in his pocket when he padded his jacket for his cellphone. It was the room key for the Sheraton Airport Hotel and he couldn't help but grin at the post-it stuck

Comments

[malyntine]

Ahhhhhhhh! Love it! Love them, love the ending. Love Eames' insecurity and Arthur's surprise. They're so unbelievably sweet.

[xheartrockx]

Thank you so much :) Glad you enjoyed it :)

[zetaori]

Ohhh, you've written porn! Amazing porn! Not only was this very hot, it was always so clear how much they cared for each other.

I loved the setting. It was nice to see it pick up from the film, especially with Arthur and Eames comparing stories in this very basic way of theirs. That was really cute.

Arthur telling Eames to shut up and vice versa, I've seen this a lot. What I think I've never seen before is the other answering "okay", and it filled me with giddy joy. Although they fight, they agree over the basic things, and that's just lovely.

The Forger smiled at him. A genuine smile, not one of his lopsided smirks. "Hi."
The exchange of "hi"? YOU KILLED ME. *gasp*

"That was..." "Yeah" "I like it when we talk afterwards."
This dialogue made me grin. It's so ... them!

Also, the second-but-last line is a total killer! I didn't see it coming, and I loved it.

♥

[xheartrockx]

Dare I say how delighted I was when I read this comment? So much actually that the girl next to me gave me a weird look. O_o

I loved the setting. It was nice to see it pick up from the film, especially with Arthur and Eames comparing stories in this very basic way of theirs. That was really cute.
That setting came to me when I sat in the movies the other week. Like... how come we never know what the other's are doing? And then it just hit me. I liked writing the back and forth, part small talk, part "Let's shag already".

Arthur telling Eames to shut up and vice versa, I've seen this a lot.....
It's probably one of the things that will show up in plenty of fics, along with the coming undone thing. I wanted them to know when it was actually time to shut up :)

The exchange of "hi"? YOU KILLED ME. *gasp*
I know, right? It's one of my favorite bits. Glad it worked as well on the page as it did in my head.

"That was..." "Yeah" "I like it when we talk afterwards."
This dialogue made me grin. It's so ... them!Hehe... it made me laugh when

[seraphinhunter]

My MA-Thesis is killing my brain, but basically, everything that zetaori just said in her comment I second.

Pr0n is always good *clings*

[xheartrockx]

Oh no.. no brain-killing... it always leaves the nastiest stains.

Thank you so much. I really means a lot :D And yeah for using that icon because that would be exactly the type of picture Athur would have on his cell ;)

♥

[xheartrockx]

Thank you :)

[we_reflamingos]

Very cute, in a porny kinda way. LOL does that even make sense? Well done ;)

[xheartrockx]

Thanks you :D And yes, it does make perfect sense :)