Inception: Suddenly My Eyes are Open

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Title: Suddenly My Eyes are Open
Pairings or Characters: Arthur/Eames
Genre: a bit of fluff and porn
Kinks: -
Setting: picks up where the movie left off
Summary: Arthur found the key card in his pocket when he padded his jacket for his cellphone. It was the room key for the Sheraton Airport Hotel and he couldn't help but grin at the post-it stuck

Comments

[xheartrockx]

Dare I say how delighted I was when I read this comment? So much actually that the girl next to me gave me a weird look. O_o

I loved the setting. It was nice to see it pick up from the film, especially with Arthur and Eames comparing stories in this very basic way of theirs. That was really cute.
That setting came to me when I sat in the movies the other week. Like... how come we never know what the other's are doing? And then it just hit me. I liked writing the back and forth, part small talk, part "Let's shag already".

Arthur telling Eames to shut up and vice versa, I've seen this a lot.....
It's probably one of the things that will show up in plenty of fics, along with the coming undone thing. I wanted them to know when it was actually time to shut up :)

The exchange of "hi"? YOU KILLED ME. *gasp*
I know, right? It's one of my favorite bits. Glad it worked as well on the page as it did in my head.

"That was..." "Yeah" "I like it when we talk afterwards."
This dialogue made me grin. It's so ... them!
Hehe... it made me laugh when I typed it on the train. Actually, I couldn't come up with what they'd say, so...

Also, the second-but-last line is a total killer!
HUZZAH!

Thanks so much for the review. ♥ Now I can read your's. I've been putting it off until I got this done :)