Stop Crumbling the Cookie!

[love_joongie]

Title: Stop crumbling the cookie!
Characters: DBSK
Pairings: mostly yunjae, yusoo
Genre: humour, highschool, a bit cracky
Length: chaptered
Rating:pg
Summary: Jaejoong just got dumped by his super hot boyfriend and drags his friend to a frat party. But when he gets a little too drunk and ends up getting almost everyone he meets as

Comments

[bexy31]

Spot~

[bexy31]

Gah, I seriously love this XD

Jaejoong's so funny! ^_^ Yay for teasing Yunho whilst getting dressed~ XD I feel sorry for his clothes and butt though...
Gak, scary butler >.< But such a sweet little sister ^_^ I love that Jaejoong couldn't remember Yunho's brother's name XD And that his new wife is really boring~ Silly Yunho, falling for her... Oh! And I love that Yunho's mum and grandma kept making innuendos ^_^

This story's wonderful just as it is, so if you don't want to put smut in, don't :) Tisn't always necessary~ And the implications that you had in this chapter were pretty good XD Lets the reader imagine what smut may have happened... Funny smut would be highly enjoyable though ^_^

Can't wait for the next chapter :D I'm sorry everything you did before got erased :( But yay for managing to do it again~ :)

[theamazingberry]

This is cute. Mischievous Jaejoong is adorable. But actually, I'd like to see a funny smut scene. Most ones I've read so far are either possessive or passionate etc. Didn't read any funny smut before. Haha, I can totally imagine Jaejoong hitting his head on the head board :D This fic is really good. Update soon ^^

[na_tammie]

I friggin love this to death. It's AWESOME really. & about the smut scene, I think you can write one without copying. You can make it funny and from ur writing, it's really unique. Update soon bb! :)

[jaedhen]

LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!jae is so funny here!couldnt stop laughing :)))))))))
thanks for the update and cant wait for more :)

[love_joongie]

Huh... I didn't kno I could do that... Alrighty then...