Snowstorm

[lotusk]

Title: Snowstorm
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Sehun/Luhan
Length: 2059 words
Summary: Sehun is just trying to enjoy the snowstorm but Luhan won't let him.
Notes: For teatimetaemint. Happy SUPER Belated Birthday, Jenni! I decided to write some cranky SeLu for you and I hope you like it! It was supposed to be a drabble but it kinda ended up being 2k, I’m so sorry orz

Comments

[teatimetaemint]

I already screamed at you over this, but I need to scream a bit more. JUST EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS MAKES ME SO FREAKIN HAPPY!
THEIR DYNAMIC
SEHUN ACTING CRANKY EVEN THOUGH HE'S ACTUALLY HAPPY TO HAVE LUHAN THERE (because he's HEAD OVER HEALS IN LOVE WITH LUHAN)
SHAMELESS LUHAN
SNARKY SHAMELESS ACTOR LUHAN
SHAMELESS ACTOR LUHAN PUTTING HIS HANDS ON SEHUN ANY CHANCE HE GETS
SEHUN LOVING EVERY SECOND OF IT
SEHUN BEING UNABLE TO ACT OUT THE SCENE WITH LUHAN BECAUSE IT HURTS/SCARES HIM TO WATCH LUHAN SLIP INTO THAT ROLE BECAUSE WHAT IF IT WERE REAL WHAT IF LUHAN GOT HURT
THE CUDDLING
THE BICKERING
THE KISSING
COLLARBONES
SEHUN FEELING HAPPY AND SECURE WHILE WATCHING THE SNOW OUTSIDE AND THINKING ABOUT HIS FUTURE WITH LUHAN

ADELE MY HEART!!!!!

Sehun was about to turn around and investigate when Luhan's arms wrapped around his waist-his collarbones pressing into Sehun's shoulder blades like they'd always been meant to go together, like they belonged. Exhaling brokenly, Sehun closed his eyes and allowed himself to sink, ever so slowly, into his boyfriend's embrace.
/clutches chest
OH GOD HELP DO YOU KNOW WHAT YOU'RE DOING TO ME WITH THIS?!

Luhan's laugh vibrated pleasantly against his skin, and Sehun was reminded of how much he hated Luhan sometimes (mostly because he didn't hate him at all).
Oh goooooooood, all these feelings! I was sitting on the train and it took everything I had in me to keep myself from making the most embarrassing noises. (I'm pretty sure I looked constipated.)

Also Luhan acting all confident and brash, but then there are those flashes of insecurity and tenderness and I just love love LOVE the way you wrote him. I love the way you wrote those two together, the way they interacted, the way they just fit, even though it might not look like it at first glance. There was so much amazingness and depth to that relationship and I LOVED IT SO MUCH! I know I keep repeating myself, but that's just how much I adored it.
You said you have no experience with writing Selu, but you did such an excellent job. This is my absolute favorite way to portray them, to make them clash, to make them fit so beautifully nevertheless /SIGHS HAPPILY

The writing, the interactions, the pure chemistry, interlaced with so much heart-warming tenderness - just everything about this made me smile and feel great AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY FOR ME AND MY BEAUTIFUL OTP. I'll reread it again before Christmas (and probably many times more) and I just know it'll make me feel this warm, happy glow inside again and again.
This was just perfect, Adele ;_____; I love you so much for writing this for me, for including all the things I love. YOU'RE THE BESTEST UNNIE IN THIS WHOLE UNIVERSE ♡

[lotusk]

I would have loved to have been on the train with you and seen your reactions LOL. I'm so glad you liked it. Idw it to just be fluff with no depth, or sarcasm with no heart. I think I managed to find a balance - I hope I did lol. It just makes me so happy that you noticed all your things I slipped in for you ^^ I love you lots, Jenni! You are the BESTEST DONGSAENG IN THIS WHOLE UNIVERSE! Enjoy your gift and I'm sorry it's so late!