Snowstorm

[lotusk]

Title: Snowstorm
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Sehun/Luhan
Length: 2059 words
Summary: Sehun is just trying to enjoy the snowstorm but Luhan won't let him.
Notes: For teatimetaemint. Happy SUPER Belated Birthday, Jenni! I decided to write some cranky SeLu for you and I hope you like it! It was supposed to be a drabble but it kinda ended up being 2k, I’m so sorry orz

Comments

[lotusk]

Thank you for reading this silliness lmao!!!

[teatimetaemint]

I already screamed at you over this, but I need to scream a bit more. JUST EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS MAKES ME SO FREAKIN HAPPY!
THEIR DYNAMIC
SEHUN ACTING CRANKY EVEN THOUGH HE'S ACTUALLY HAPPY TO HAVE LUHAN THERE (because he's HEAD OVER HEALS IN LOVE WITH LUHAN)
SHAMELESS LUHAN
SNARKY SHAMELESS ACTOR LUHAN
SHAMELESS ACTOR LUHAN PUTTING HIS HANDS ON SEHUN ANY CHANCE HE GETS
SEHUN LOVING EVERY SECOND OF IT
SEHUN BEING UNABLE TO ACT OUT THE SCENE WITH LUHAN BECAUSE IT HURTS/SCARES HIM TO WATCH LUHAN SLIP INTO THAT ROLE BECAUSE WHAT IF IT WERE REAL WHAT IF LUHAN GOT HURT
THE CUDDLING
THE BICKERING
THE KISSING
COLLARBONES
SEHUN FEELING HAPPY AND SECURE WHILE WATCHING THE SNOW OUTSIDE AND THINKING ABOUT HIS FUTURE WITH LUHAN

ADELE MY HEART!!!!!

Sehun was about to turn around and investigate when Luhan's arms wrapped around his waist-his collarbones pressing into Sehun's shoulder blades like they'd always been meant to go together, like they belonged. Exhaling brokenly, Sehun closed his eyes and allowed himself to sink, ever so slowly, into

[lotusk]

I would have loved to have been on the train with you and seen your reactions LOL. I'm so glad you liked it. Idw it to just be fluff with no depth, or sarcasm with no heart. I think I managed to find a balance - I hope I did lol. It just makes me so happy that you noticed all your things I slipped in for you ^^ I love you lots, Jenni! You are the BESTEST DONGSAENG IN THIS WHOLE UNIVERSE! Enjoy your gift and I'm sorry it's so late!

[read0write]

wah~~~~~~~~~~~~~
the adorable selu heeheehee
that was great, wonderful heeheehee
i enjoyed it :)

[lotusk]

Thank you, Tiffany!!

[bluedreaming]

I feel sorry that I didn't read this when you posted it, first I got mixed up with shiritori and then I lost track of my time (my fault!) but I feel more sorry for myself for missing out because this is glorious.

I don't know I can ever find the words to explain in way in which you'll believe that I meant it when I say I love your writing style, your intensity of character and emotion--there's a vividness to your characters that brings them to life and I think this particular story showcases this excellently. On the surface level, one might be tempted to say, "Oh, another cute and fluffy domestic piece," and leave it at that. And that would be okay, because this is a cute and fluffy domestic piece, that's a part of it, and it's a very good part. But that's not all, and that's not what any of your stories are. Because you dig down deeply into your characters, so that even a simple turn of events is imbued with a certain depth and complexity, because the characters are not simple facsimiles of "A" and "B" but rather full characters,

[lotusk]

This is hardly rambling!!!! Your comments always make me cry ISTG ;;;; if ever I feel down about my writing I'll come and reread this comment so I can soak up some comfort and shore up some confidence. Thank you for taking the time to put all this down - I'm so grateful for you, I don't even know how to tell you ;;;; ily you lots, ansabear /rolls all over you crying

[bluedreaming]

Well I meant every bit ^^ and if it gives you confidence to read it and keep going then I'm glad ^^ i love you too <3

[lotusk]

/hugs you forever ;;;;