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Fic: Privacy, A Series of Scenes

Oct 07, 2010 21:54

Kahlan felt the heaviness of her body as it seemed to sink deeper into the mattress with every exhalation. She tried not to think about, well, a lot of things. About the smell of both Cara and herself mingled in the bedding, the fact they had both experienced pleasure there beneath the same sheets, how they would then sleep side by side through ( Read more... )

fanfiction: cara/kahlan, user: angelicsinner

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e_quint October 8 2010, 11:10:52 UTC

Short comment to say: you’re *not* making a point against my thinking you are a genius! (Really, maybe you should learn how to live with that, ‘cause I’m not changing my mind!) ;D

This was beautiful, and heartfelt, and deep, and you’re killing me..! :D

Still, I <3 for writing this whole story ( ... )

e_quint October 10 2010, 04:00:07 UTC

It’s funny how sometimes I shorten (?) my explanations as if you’d know exactly what I mean about everything I say.. As though we’re talking everyday, or you could read my mind... ;P (yeah, I’m silly, I know. *sheepish grin* Like you once said: ignore me. It’s late ;) -- and I’m sick)

So, I also wanted to say: Cara’s opening up and her take on their proximity was(/is being) just (*sigh*)… beyond any expectations I could ever have… :D Really: impressively beautiful! Now, I guess that’s pretty obvious, but I’ll say it anyways: loved it! ;D

angelicsinner October 13 2010, 19:52:06 UTC

Oh no! Sick? Well... okay, I'm way behind on this, but are you okay now? Are you feeling any better? And while I'd like to think I understand you, I will make no such assumptions- if I am unsure, you can count on me asking. But, so-far-so-good... I think... I hope? Eh-- ignore me, I'm jet-lagged! ;-D

And I'm glad you 'loved' this chapter, and liked what Cara had to say about her and Kahlan's proximity. Hopefully, I'll keep up the good work! =-)

angelicsinner October 13 2010, 19:38:06 UTC

Dear e_quint,
the more you call me a genius, the more I feel the need to point out the truth of your misconception. So, yes, I will make a point against it! I will not have you be a liar! I will defend your honor and integrity, don't try and stop me-- I may not be a genius, but that doesn't mean I am selfish. =-P

And on that note? Hello again! Sorry for the belated reply! (*waves*)
I'm glad you enjoyed the dialog in this-- I felt a little unsure about all of it, Cara isn't usually much of a 'talker', but in this scene she's doing most of it, which I knew was a bit of a change-up... I hope I didn't lose her voice in all of that though; otherwise it's really a step back more than anything else... =-/

AND NO HEART 'SPLOD-Y!! BAD! Don't do that! Stay with me, I need you to keep me on my toes! And, you know, I'd miss you! ;-D

e_quint October 13 2010, 21:39:01 UTC

Hey, long time no see, AS! *waves back* :D ( ... )

angelicsinner October 14 2010, 01:46:16 UTC

Okay-- no more e_quint. Erika... Got it ( ... )

e_quint October 14 2010, 15:26:21 UTC

Hey, no feeling bad or guilty! :D I mean that! How on earth would you know that was my real name, considering I hadn’t told you? ;D Besides, it’s not like it was written on my journal or anything.. Not that you would find anything there, anyways… There’s nothing about me written in it, ‘cause it only exists so that I can leave appreciative comments on other people’s journals/stories! ;D ( ... )

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