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Big Bad Wolf for janie_tangerine

Dec 18, 2009 13:21

Title: Big Bad Wolf
Author: gottalovev
Recipient: janie_tangerine
Pairing or Characters: Damon Salvatore/Jack Shephard (crossover fic)
Rating, word count: NC-17, about 5250 words
Warnings: The POV character is pretty cruel, but in a 'fun' way? I hope it doesn't trigger anyone. If so, I'm sorry. I do not own any characters, I just play with them.
Prompt: Boone/Jack, ( Read more... )

lost hohoho 2009: fic

Comments 19

part I because IT DESERVES MORE CHARACTERS THAT LJ ALLOWS janie_tangerine December 18 2009, 23:11:41 UTC

OH MY GOD.

OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW, MYSTERY PERSON, THAT I CAN'T EVEN. OHMYGOD. (If you are who I might think you are a lot of things are explained but if I'm wrong here ignore me)

OHMYGOD I WAS SO NOT EXPECTING THIS BUT IT WENT BEYOND ANY OF MY POSSIBLE EXPECTATIONS OH MY. THIS COMMENT WILL PROBABLY BE AS LONG AS THE FIC BUT THERE'S SO MUCH AWESOMENESS IN THIS I CAN'T EVEN SAY. OMG I CAN'T EVEN.

Okay, first of all, you SO nailed all my prompts omg. The crack was glorious, the crossdressing was just delicious and you sort of gave me Jack/Boone too and OMGGGGG. You also explained everything so well and so neatly ohmy, this whole thing was such a PLEASURE to read. You got Damon so down pat, snark and evilness and unlikeness and charm and srsly, Damon posing as Boone = hiiii, my brain is going on vacation. And now sorry but I'll end up quoting half of this at you because otherwise I just can't even.

For a second there, Damon felt a spark of real affection for the girl. He still planned to kill her, but maybe last. He ( ... )

Re: part II because IT DESERVES MORE CHARACTERS THAT LJ ALLOWS janie_tangerine December 18 2009, 23:12:37 UTC

And I won't kill you, yet, he didn't add - unless Jack was a lousy lay, or he'd revaluate. He had a limited amount of patience, after all.

OH GOD THIS KILLED ME TOO. IT'S SO DAMON, KILLING PEOPLE BECAUSE THEY'RE LOUSY LAYS. <333

Okay. The part where he puts on the women's clothes in the luggage? HOT. HOT. BEYOND HOT. I'm still fanning here, ohmy. I completely was hyperventilating with joy by then XDD mm. And lacy too. I approve. -nod-

dragging his bare feet in the undergrowth to make a bit of noise to attract his attention.thanks for indulging all my kinks by the way. ;) Mm. Bare feet. YES ( ... )

Re: part II because IT DESERVES MORE CHARACTERS THAT LJ ALLOWS gottalovev January 1 2010, 18:01:59 UTC

HI HI ( ... )

Re: part II because IT DESERVES MORE CHARACTERS THAT LJ ALLOWS janie_tangerine January 2 2010, 00:41:04 UTC

HIIIIIIIII! YES I TOTALLY GUESSED IT WAS YOU because I remembered that post where you said it fit all the prompts but not exactly I started suspecting :DDD and then I saw it was you and I was like I TOTALLY KNEW IT :D

And omg I so want to read that other one. Jack's POV would be so hilarious!

And ha, my reaction was completely what this awesomeness deserves. Because this was absolutely awesomeness. I swear I wanted to quote back everything ;) you totally earned your ego booster. And I'd read Damon's adventures everyday!! <333

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gottalovev January 1 2010, 18:04:55 UTC

aww, thank you, so nice of you! and HA! I need to go comment on MY fic again now that I know it was you! YAY! *smooches*

and thanks again babe for the beta, it was awesome. and you can imagine I was thrilled by Janie's response ;)

tokenblkgirl December 19 2009, 04:22:35 UTC

Good lord, this was fantastic. I have no words, just--amazing. I love this so, so much. :)

gottalovev January 1 2010, 18:05:46 UTC

thank you, so much! as you can imagine, this fic was all kinds of fun to do, and for a first time writing Damon, it was a blast! so glad you liked it!

haldoor December 29 2009, 10:00:04 UTC

Oh, good God, I don't even know the The Vampire Diaries, but this was excellent - so very snarky and funny and sexy too! Awesome! ;-)

gottalovev January 1 2010, 18:07:06 UTC

yay! thanks so much for taking a change reading this even if you didn't know The Vampire Diaries! I am so glad you liked it!

as you can imagine, this was a blast to do, so glad it came out enjoyable =D

haldoor January 1 2010, 21:19:59 UTC

Hee - why didn't I guess it was you? The guessing was hard! But I'm so glad this went down so well for you, love - it is a great story and so much fun! I'm definitely watching The Vampire Diaries when it comes to our shores this year! ;-)

gottalovev January 5 2010, 16:25:12 UTC

TVD is definitely AWFUL for several episodes. I used to have it on and only perk up at when Ian appeared. but then it sort of got interesting and Damon is one AWESOME snarktastic character... =D

jaydblu January 4 2010, 19:15:46 UTC

This, ha. I love this. The story is just...inspired. It was amusing and hot as hell. For some reason, this...
He managed to keep control, though, since he had taken the edge off the constant hunger by feeding in the night on some suckers who were traipsing around in the jungle in hobo clothes for some reason.
...had me cracking up. I'm glad that Damon was taking a moment to examine the ridiculousness of some of the things on the island (Smokey) and making his own personal observations about them. And oh yeah, I'm glad he chose Jack to stalk for his hot sex encounter. That was good stuff. Indeed. :D

gottalovev January 5 2010, 16:23:38 UTC

tee hee! as you can imagine, this was really fun to do. so glad that you enjoyed it! (and I'm pretty glad I was just not laughing by myself to my stupid jokes!)

thanks for reading and telling me you liked it! yay!