Fic: The Four Loves

[lorien_eve]

Title: The Four Loves
Author: Lorien_Eve
Pairing: Harry/Ron
Rating: PG-13
Summary: "The ones who love us never truly leave us."
Warnings: The biggest warning is character death. There is a small bit of implied het, but it's mostly just a misunderstanding between Harry and Ron.
Disclaimer: In my dreams, I own Harry and Ron. In reality,

Comments

[slytherhyme]

This is written simply wonderfully. The plot flows so smoothly, and the characters remain themselves throughout it all. What I love about it is how everything falls into place, without any trouble. It just sort of is.

I love this passage in particular:

He kissed like he did everything else, with all of his heart. I felt his arms around my neck and his body pressed to mine, and I knew that he’d been wanting me for as long as I’d been wanting him. This time, we really did kiss until we were breathless. My hands grasped for every part of him, and in between kisses, he chanted my name. If I could relive one moment in my life, it would be this night. Now I know why they make Pensives.

The only things I would question are: why is Hagrid the Gryffindor Head of House? Couldn't McGonagall stay Headmistress and Head? Harry and Ginny started going out, but how come there was no mention of how they went out before? Judging by the fact that this is set afetr Harry knows about the Horcruxes, they would be in seventh year by now. Why did Harry return to school? What is school life like now that Dumbledore is gone?

These are just suggestions and things I wondered about while reading this. Overall, keep up the fantastic work.

[lorien_eve]

Thanks so much for the feedback! And thanks for the concrit, too. I always welcome suggestions.

I made Hagrid Head of Gryffindor just because I wanted him to be. I think it's a possibility for book seven, and it seems like with all the recent developments, McGonagall will have her hands full as Headmistress.

As for Harry and Ginny in HBP...it's like what happened to Sirius in OotP. I refuse to accept it. It never happened. Although my beta *did* suggest that I mention/explain it in the author's notes. Maybe I should've listened to her. :)

Thanks again for taking the time to reply. I really appreciate your compliments and suggestions. :)