What's To Come Is Still Unsure (2/16?)

[lorelaisquared]

Title: What's to Come is still Unsure(2/16?)
Author: lorelaisquared
Rating: PG-13
Characters: TenII, Rose, Jackie
Word Count: 3727
Beta: The incredible cookie2697
Summary: Part One in an epic love story spanning time and space: When the Doctor abandons Rose in Pete's world with his counterpart, they must learn to live without him. Slowly they build a life together that

Comments

[meremoon]

Oh, such a sweet chapter, with Ten's joy at her declaration of love - and the TARDIS is like their child, grown out of their love. *happy sigh*

And yet we still have the mystery of the Dimension Cannon and the Ood - I can't wait to see where that's going!

[lorelaisquared]

Awww Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed the sweetness of this chapter. I do like how they are here as they work through some of their issues. OH! Yay! I'm so glad you picked up on the comparison to the TARDIS being like their child. That was an accidental correlation that I just fell in love with. It works so well with this story.

I'm so happy you like this! :) Thanks for reading!

[lorelaisquared]

*Squeeeeeeeeeeeee* OMG your review filled my soul with delighted jumping beans. I almost leapt off the couch in excitement when I first read this... Thank you! But I was good and waited to finish betaing the next chapter of cookie2697's new fic before I was allowed to respond.

My heart! It's fluttering all over the place Awwwws YAY! :) I'm glad!

I love the way you handled this chapter. Thank you so, so much. This section of the story was tricky because I had a lot to get through in a relatively short amount of time.

Hee. The kiss on the porch was totally added just two days ago. Initially I had some narration there instead but my beta pushed me to make it more active, she was exactly right. It worked so much better this way! I'm glad you liked ti! :)

I just knew he was thinking what he was thinking before he said it, Ha! You be psychic! I love that you were able to predict that! It means he's in character! YAY!

and I love that Rose reassured him and it was the first time she said "ILU" to him and basically chose him over Ten and his

[lorelaisquared]

LOL! Well I'm glad my review made you squee. I didn't feel like it was very detailed, just a ball of jumbled gush. :) But I'm glad it made you happy, hee! HAHAHA! Jumbled gush is good too. It means the story affected you and that is a very, very good thing. :D

A very good move, methinks. ;) We got more hot stuff! \o/ And for other reasons of course. x) LOLOL! I might be willing to do some one shot "missing scenes" at some point that could have a higher rating... *hee* Once I'm further into the story I'll do a prompt post for those...

Hee! Yep! Very! In fact in the beginning when he was saying they should stop looking for it so actively, and he was so sad and saying he was sorry... I already knew he was thinking silly things that he was. Silly Time Lord-human. :)

LOLOLOL Some things never change. Half human or no, the Doctor is predictable when it comes to being self deprecating isn't he? (Although, am I the only one who finds it amusing that he's technically jealous of HIMSELF? I'm just saying...)

Well you certainly succeeded

[justlook3]

Awwww, so adorable! I echo above, getting distracted with the cute.

[lorelaisquared]

Hee, they are pretty adorable aren't they? *happy sigh* Huzzah for Happy, falling in love times! :)

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying! :)

[amyo67]

You have me hooked now. What a sweet chapter. I am enjoying this story.

[lorelaisquared]

Awww that's so great! I'm delighted that you're hooked and enjoying the story so much. There's plenty more to come! (in total it's a little over 50,000 words before betaing, I've already added stuff though so it's probably over that now - also there's already a sequel in the works - all will be made clear as time goes on!).

[magali29]

Aaah, I knew it! I knew that the baby Tardis was reacting to the Doctor and Rose's relationship. Nice to read some fluff. I hope it won't stop and that we won't get too much angst? I can do without the angst.

Now, about the Ood and the dimension canon... weird stuff. What's really going on, here? No idea.

[lorelaisquared]

Aaah, I knew it! I knew that the baby Tardis was reacting to the Doctor and Rose's relationship. Nice to read some fluff *g* Yes! You were right. The TARDIS is deeply tied to not just TenII but to Rose as well. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the fluff.

I hope it won't stop and that we won't get too much angst? I can do without the angst. *looks guilty* I don't want to give anything away (nor do I want to mislead anyone) but there will be some angst. I think I managed to achieve a good balance though, and there's also plenty of fluf. I promise the angsty chapters will have warnings so you know what to expect. Just know that I am a hopeless romantic and that ultimately this saga will have a happy ending. I NEED a happy ending and the whole point of this story is to give that to all parties involved.

Now, about the Ood and the dimension canon... weird stuff. What's really going on, here? No idea. *whistles and looks innocent. No idea. Nope. None at all...

[wiggiemomsi]

"Now, about the Ood and the dimension canon... weird stuff. What's really going on, here? No idea. *whistles and looks innocent. No idea. Nope. None at all..."

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!, but I know ....

[lorelaisquared]

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!, but I know ....

*gives wiggiemomsi the teacher glare* FINGERS ON LIPS!!!!