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Jan 08, 2010 11:06


Good morning!  Well, it's morning anyway.
The house has no water.
I swear my first thought was "omg, there better be internet."  It's nice to occasionally re-assess your priorities as you traipse along the daisy trail of life.
On a more positive note, I knocked out about 3.5 pages of KakaSaku Project yesterday.  Yay!  I also stayed up until 5am doing it.  I was gonna say "more on that later", but who am I kidding...

Naruto1: KakaSaku Project
So chapter 9 is done.  The title is "Iruka Kakashi Sakura’s Croissant, Touching, and If Conversations Could Kill".  All of the titles have the format A, B, and C except 6 and 7 which are... Actually, I should write them out here.  I need to see them listed.
  1. Scarred Grass, Scarred Children, and Sakura’s Old Friends
  2. Medicine, the Truth, and Kakashi’s Useless Tongue
  3. Cravings, In with the Old, and Omg, Sasuke! You’re so Dreaaaamy!
  4. Shikamaru Strips, Kakashi Uses His Tongue, and Panic
  5. Happy Genjutsus, Playing with Fire, and Sakura’s Limit
  6. The Devil On My Shoulder: Kakashi
  7. The Devil On My Shoulder: Sakura
  8. Inuzuka Hana, Uchiha Sasuke, and Hatake Kakashi
  9. Iruka Kakashi Sakura’s Croissant, Touching, and If Conversations Could Kill

Looking at them, I think ch. 5's title needs to be redone.  I don't like "Sakura's limit."  Its referring to when she gets angry with Kakashi because he's inadvertantly messing with her head, but I don't know that it reached any limits.  Ch. 9's title has "touching" in it, which is weird.  I wonder why I named it that.  Oh, cuz Sakura touches Kakashi.  (Shrug)  Eh.  That'll have to be redone, too.
The story itself is getting to be a weird mix of my typical frolic and my typical angst.  It's like they're all happy one moment and cursing life the next.  I wonder if it’s the characters that are just steering the story that way, or if, just by property of being a really long-ass story it's more telling of my style.  I'm not bipolar, I swear, even if my stories read like they are.

So why was I up ‘til 5am?  Well, I went to bed at 11:30 having finished a light and cheery chapter 8, but it was not meant to be.  Sasuke’s conversation with Danzo kept swimming through my head.  I saw visions of dark basements and evil people plotting.  I really fought the urge to give Danzo Dora-chan’s white-furred cousin to stroke.  Maybe I should write crack.  Maybe I will.  (Eh, probably not).  So I got up and kept writing.  Thank goodness I’m on break.

Oh look, the water’s back on.  Maybe a pipe froze.

So anyway, I’m happy its finally getting some semblance of a plot.  I was trying to avoid being too obvious about it from the starts, dropping hints as I go along, but in the end, it might prove to be more confusing than anything else so I just put the cards on the table in ch. 9.  Not to say there won’t be a twist or something, but I’m starting to get pretty paranoid that the story is really confusing and too complicated for happy-fun-fanfic-time.  Well, if that’s the case, I just won’t publish it.  Or I’ll publish it and let the cards fall as they may.

So tired...

Here's a random closing thought... Why is there not more Shikaku?  The man is unbelieeeevably hot!!  If you're cannon, why not write more about him and Yoshino's first hook-up or if you're a little more adventurous, stick him in sexy soup with Kakashi and/or Azuma? 
Aw, man!!  Now I have to go take a cold shower...

What I’m proud of today: “To call him a woman is a little harsh don’t you think?  Even giving his persuasion...” and moving the croissant around.  I rocked that one.

azuma, shikaku, kakashi

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