Silence & Safety Part 18: Run *Nikki; PG-13/K*

Jun 04, 2009 22:21

Title: Run
Series: Silence and Safety *18/21*
Author: loozy
Characters: Nikki
Rating: PG- 13/ K
Summary: The music gets her off her rhythm, her breathing hitches, the flow is lost.
Word Count: 180
Spoilers: after 5x21, Disturbed
Notes: I gave Nikki a shot... Let’s see how it worked out...
Prompt: # 155 Therapy
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the ( Read more... )

creativity: series: silence & safety, fangirl: numb3rs, creativity: writing, creativity: drabble, creativity: fanfiction

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summere7 June 4 2009, 22:11:42 UTC
Excellent work!!

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loozy June 5 2009, 09:43:40 UTC
Thank you :)

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loozy June 5 2009, 09:43:54 UTC
Thanks a bunch :D

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bobthesungod June 5 2009, 18:36:08 UTC
Makes me curious what she IS listening to...

Beyonce? Jamie Scott & the Town? the Stereophonics? VH1 Divas Live?

I'm gonna have to think on that.

You're making me ponder here.

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bobthesungod June 5 2009, 18:36:56 UTC
If you decide not to cover that topic in a fic, is it okay if I do? I mean, it's not definite that I would or could, but its something I wanna think about, if you don't want to tackle it.

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loozy June 5 2009, 19:59:55 UTC
Knock yourself out, write away... I loathe Nikki, so I will avoid writing her like the plague :P

But a reference, source or something like that, would be nice, when you post it... And I will even read it :D

I cannot say how much these reviews mean to me... They are brilliant and thanks so much for reading...

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bobthesungod June 6 2009, 21:48:58 UTC
haha, I'm sorry you loathe Nikki. At first I didn't like her either, but I dunno, she kinda grew on me.

Would I miss her if they created a new character? I'm not sure. :/

But I've been pondering this allll day and I do think I need something needs to come out of this eventually, JUST to get it off my mind, ya know?

And you will receive total due and all that jazz.

And about your story here, it's totally my pleasure reading it!!!!! I'm really really enjoying it

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emmademarais June 5 2009, 19:40:30 UTC
Oh, I like this! I remember how important flow was when running and when it's off nothing works right and you're more susceptible to injury.

Poor Nikki - she needs to find a better way to deal than just keeping hitting the pavement.

Nice job!

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loozy June 5 2009, 19:47:57 UTC
I'd reckon that Edgerton can help her take the edge off now :D

I know it all about the flow... From running and rowing... Rhythm is just so important and once you have lost it, it is so damning hard to get it back because then you are lost...

Thanks :D

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emmademarais June 5 2009, 20:20:46 UTC
Oh jeez, yeah. Rowing would *so* suck without flow!

Hee @ Edgerton. Did you know there's an ian_nikki comm now?

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loozy June 5 2009, 21:08:38 UTC
*rofl*

I didn't think about the flow... Hahahahahahahahahahahaha *nearly falls off couch, laughing*

Ah yeah... The only prob is that I hate Nikki... So while I am a supporter of her and Edgerton, the Edgerton- goodness overshadows the Nikki- dislike... Does that make any sense? :P

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rodlox June 6 2009, 03:36:39 UTC
I'd offer to run with her but she'd doubtlessly outrun me easily.

excellent drabble.

(clearly, though, the mp3 player needs to die)

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loozy June 6 2009, 11:49:48 UTC
MP3- players always play the most unconvenient music at the most unconvenient of times ;)

Thank you very very very much :D

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