Comments | lomonaaeren: Chapter Eight of 'Changing of the Guard'- Yes, Right in the Middle of Diagon Alley

lomonaaeren

Chapter Eight of 'Changing of the Guard'- Yes, Right in the Middle of Diagon Alley

Mar 22, 2008 22:44

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humor, harry/draco, changing of the guard, angst, rated r or nc-17, ewe, romance

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guardians_song March 23 2008, 02:58:16 UTC

Ooh, things are heating up... And Malfoy's brilliant. *applauds* *will lurk, waiting for the next update* :D

lomonaaeren March 23 2008, 03:03:55 UTC

Yes. Draco is going to become more determined to figure out who the hell Brian is from here on out.

And thank you!

anonymous March 23 2008, 03:40:40 UTC

Woohwooo! I'm itching for more please!

lomonaaeren March 24 2008, 02:15:23 UTC

More in a few days!

anonymous March 23 2008, 04:12:04 UTC

Brilliant!! I'm really loving this. :)

lomonaaeren March 24 2008, 02:15:32 UTC

Thank you so much!

duchessa March 23 2008, 04:19:20 UTC

Yet another 'Harry too close to the surface' screw up...there's been too many of those in this chapter alone, Harry better be *extra* careful. I love how Draco and Harry's thoughts parallel each other. First their agreement about that the sex was great (only 'pleasant' Draco? - someone's still a bit peeved their partner isn't quite so smitten) but too dangerous to repeat. And then there's their assessment on their situation - it's really kind of funny how they agree without knowing each other's thoughts ( ... )

duchessa March 23 2008, 17:08:39 UTC

Machineries, not menagerie. I don't know where that come from.

lomonaaeren March 24 2008, 02:18:05 UTC

Well, to be fair, I think the only big one in this chapter is Harry letting his temper get the better of them. After that, he vanishes into Brian ( ... )

kawanale March 23 2008, 05:01:57 UTC

Whoa, Draco bought Brian a ring? Isn't there something somewhere that sigals a ring means something? Well, doah, of course it does! Draco and Brian have been dating for a while and it is a gift from a long-term lover to another! Well, well, well, what would Papa and Mama Malfoy make of such a fancy bauble on a man they would rather be a woman? Hehe.

This is getting deeper and deeper for Harry! He was looking at a tray of emeralds, when of course his eyes are green, and Brian's are blue. Oh yeah, Harry is slipping a wee bit. Smarten up laddie!

lomonaaeren March 24 2008, 02:19:03 UTC

There definitely is no same-sex marriage in this world, but yes, Draco's parents will be upset once they notice the ring (and hear about Draco buying it so publicly).

To be honest, if Harry screwed up with the emeralds, it was an unconscious thing. He was just looking for a distraction from Draco.