Cloud no. 9

Dec 30, 2010 07:56


1) All fills for prompts of the earlier prompt posts go in the post the prompt was posted in. No re-posting or splitting up prompts and fills.
2) Self-prompt when you post unprompted fic. (This means posting what the fill is about in a first comment, like a real prompt, and commenting on that with your fill.)
3) Try not to get too srs business. ( Read more... )

prompting: 09

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Re: Fill 3/3 [Milixander] anonymous January 3 2011, 05:26:00 UTC
Ed stays perfectly motionless as Douglas slowly leans toward him, lips parted slightly. A small whimper escapes Ed’s mouth when their lips touch and Douglas isn’t quite sure if he’s asleep or not because Ed seems to be reciprocating. Their lips barely brush against each other, as if both are too scared to admit to the colossal reality of the situation. Occasionally a tongue emerges from either mouth and licks the other’s bottom lip until they both touch lightly, when Ed finally loses all restraint and presses Douglas against him desperately and allows his tongue into his mouth.
He groans quietly and Douglas swears it is the most beautiful fucking thing he has heard.

It’s frantic now because it’s years’ worth of emotion that is protesting its need to leave as soon as possible. It’s everything they’ve never spoke about for years - it’s the nightmare of the denial rising and rising until you can’t breathe.
Because Ed’s too scared of drowning now and Douglas can’t let him sink. He can’t deny reality when it’s kissing down his neck and he’s pleading and writhing for more. He can’t drown when his face is flushed, back arched and moaning because of the very thing he denied. Douglas makes it so that Ed can’t deny by the desperate scratches on the inside of his thighs and the hickeys on his neck.

When it’s over, Douglas pulls him close. Ed’s eyes are half-lidded with lethargy and the only motion he manages before sleep is to nuzzle closer to Douglas.

“You can stay here forever," Douglas whispers to his sleeping partner.

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Hope that was okay, I know it's a bit short ;)

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Re: Fill 3/3 [Milixander] anonymous January 3 2011, 11:21:47 UTC
I loved this, anon. <333 I've been kind of dubious about EMil / DAlexander, but this has changed my mind. We need moar of it!

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Re: Fill 3/3 [Milixander] anonymous January 3 2011, 11:59:58 UTC
I agree, we definately need more - especially if it's as good as this! I loved this anon, and the last line is lovely :) <3

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Re: Fill 3/3 [Milixander] -op anonymous January 3 2011, 19:04:03 UTC
Dear anon, I love you. This was perfect! I love how you mixed the drowning and the party tensions in the dream, and I really really love your EMil- pitch perfect :-) And Ed's terrifed look and the Milixander at the end made me melt... thank you so much!

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Re: Fill 3/3 [Milixander] anonymous March 9 2011, 23:12:04 UTC
Lovely fill authoranon! I love this pair so much. Good job at capturing their tentativeness and then desperation for each other <3

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