Diary of a.............

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Thursday, March 2, 2017                               6:43am
Dear Diary Journal

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[kathrynrose]

"Creepy" was the word I was looking for. Also compelling. Nicely done. :)

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Thank you!! I was really hoping that the creepy factor shined.. I was going for the "you never know" factor of life.. I feel like this is one I will go back to and revamp a bit when I have more time.. 😁😁

[kathrynrose]

If you do, it might be fun to ask people when they caught that something was off,

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That's a fantastic idea!! I was wondering that when I was writing it because I already knew the ending so I was curious to know when people figured out that something wasn't quite right. When did you catch on?? I tried to drop little hints but I hope I didn't give it away too soon. 🤗🤗

[kathrynrose]

When he said it was six months I wondered why he didn't ask her out, but hadn't figured stalker.

By the elevator I knew there was something wrong.

By "I think we had our first fight," I was concerned that it would end badly for one of them. It ratcheted up from there. :)

[lolaslaughter]

That's awesome! That is pretty spot on to the progression I was going for! I'm so glad it read that way and thank you so much for the feedback!! Now this is definitely one I plan on revisiting! :)