Week 7 - Comment.
My comment on: http://chrisoneill.livejournal.com/3916.html
Hi Chris
I really enjoyed reading your poem, it reminded me of the poem 'advertisement' we read in lit recently, especially the use of personification in giving the inanimate human emotions but in doing so creating a story! I was keen to know more about Joe and what he had done!
Nice work!
Liz
Hi Chris
I really enjoyed reading your poem, it reminded me of the poem 'advertisement' we read in lit recently, especially the use of personification in giving the inanimate human emotions but in doing so creating a story! I was keen to know more about Joe and what he had done!
Nice work!
Liz