The Freudian Slip (8/15) (Part Three)

[live_by_lyrics]

Title: The Freudian Slip (8/15) (Part Three)
Author: Gess aka live_by_lyrics
Pairing: Jack Barakat/Alex Gaskarth
P.O.V.: third person omniscient, (slightly limited to Jack Barakat)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: References to sensuous touching and psychiatric help.
Summary: An amateur psychoanalyst becomes enamoured with his latest patient.
Disclaimer: This

Comments

[katriina125]

This is, by far, my favorite fic on lj. Sorry for not commenting on the last few posts, I was on vacation and didn't get the chance to go on a computer

THIS BETTER POST DAMMIT.

[live_by_lyrics]

Awh thank you :) It’s okay. I’m glad you commented on this one though, LJ is being such a pain I was worried no one would be able to comment at a time where I’ve been feeling so unsure of myself

[katriina125]

Oh no! If LJ doesn't let me post on here in the future, I'll be sure to leave you a message in your ask. I don't want you to feel unsure of yourself ): You are the best writer I know. I mean that

[live_by_lyrics]

Awh thank you :) You're so sweet

[23a_j10]

This chapter is pure gold.
Honestly, this is amazing Gess. I love how everything just makes sense. All the costumes are just spot on and Alex's character is becoming more and more defined and inciting as you write him.
I'm very interested to know more about Gabe's reaction to meeting Alex but I'm sure you'll tell us that when and I we need to know. I like how sometimes through Jack's very composed self he shows he is actually human aswell, not just an attractive robot :L

But really, mental images!!
Jack Barakat and tight lycra... Enough said!

[live_by_lyrics]

Ah, I don’t know what to say that XD I really like this chapter too, but I felt unsure of my capability to do it justice. I was afraid I might have pushed it with the bar fight, and wouldn’t be able to ‘reign things back in’ properly. But I’m super relieved to hear it makes sense. I did some research on each of their costumes, and made sure to add a little explanation about the connection :)

I’m working on Alex, slowly but surely all will be revealed. But yes, keep an eye on Gabe! He’ll give us the first major clue.
Ahaha, attractive robot. I think because it’s written from Jack’s POV in a way, he comes off as perfect. But let’s face it, he’s got a sex drive and makes mistakes just like everyone else.

Tight, black, slightly shiny spandex that clings to his body as he moves. Ahaha, I’ve forever tainted my childhood image of super heroes.

Ps. How is Wonderland going? I really want to work on it before I attempt anymore of TFS :)

[23a_j10]

This is by far my favourite chapter of this story. The entire theme of Halloween is fantastic and relevant an yeah. I just love the way you write and your characters are so in role, if that makes sense. None of them are perfect just humanly flawed in the best way, or at least the most interesting way possible.
Also, sorry for any typos I'm using my iPod as my laptop is being a moody bitch today.

It's going well! Tomorrow I shall sendyou where I've written up to, maybe you'd like to write the next scene of, uh, yeah I probably shouldn't give it away here but yeah xD urrrgh I'm tired and not making sense, ignore me and wait for a coherent message.

I love this story

[jrlover88]

I love that the plot is thickening.. Love this story and you are such a great writer..

[live_by_lyrics]

Thank you :) I love this story too, I just get unsure of my ability to do it justice.

[jrlover88]

You are so welcome!! I'll give support where I can.

[jrlover88]

You are so welcome!! I'll give support where I can.

[songs_and_words]

Ahhh I loved the batman robin costumes. And alex is gonna let jack in! I want to know what alex did that was so terrible and how gabe knows him already. This story is fantastic.

[live_by_lyrics]

Ahaha, I thought it was cute to have them match :) And yes! Though really he's only agreed to TRY and let Jack in. It's going to be a struggle where Gabe will give us some information, and Alex will have to explain himself.

Thank you :)

[charlieeetoyc]

This story is amazing, it made my day when you updated :')
I think the plot is thickening perfectly, I love how it's not too rushed but there's still a lot happening. Can't wait for the next update :3

[live_by_lyrics]

Thank you, I had been trying to post for days and just wanted to get it out XD
I'm glad you like the pace. I always worry I'm too slow and that people will get bored.
I'm currently brainstorming chapter nine:)