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Alone

Feb 11, 2010 15:51

Title: Alone
Author: littleton_pace
Rating: PG
Characters: Claire
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers for 6x03.
Summary: She's alone. Written for lost_in_108

( My life is different now... )

prompt - #20, fanfiction, lost_in_108

Comments 5

ovariesofsteel February 11 2010, 14:08:00 UTC

This was lovely. Her suffering was palpable.

ciaimpala February 11 2010, 14:54:51 UTC

Amazing Kat! I feel like you really captured what Claire would be thinking and feeling.

jemmalynette February 11 2010, 16:04:06 UTC

I agree with what's been said already ;) This is awesome, Kat!

anonymous February 13 2010, 01:22:01 UTC

Andi, here...

didn't realize i could post a comment...i tried once before...hmph.

i never knew 108 words could capture a moment, a feeling, like you captured our girl here. i like how you touched on the "darkness"...that's the one aspect of "what happened to claire" that i need to see pan out!

awesome. stay wood.

hobbitrockgod February 14 2010, 23:38:33 UTC

That's awesome, Kat! You really did a good job capturing all her emotion in like two paragraphs. =P