Staying Here

[littlenotebook]

Title: Staying Here
Fandom: Hot Fuzz
Pairing: pre-slash and/or slight Nicholas/Danny
Word count: 1,356
Prompt: Hot Fuzz, Nicholas Angel/Danny Butterman, Nicholas's girlfriend wants him back, and keeps asking what's keeping him in Sanford. But it's hard for Nicholas to explain something he doesn't fully understand himself, yet.
Summary: He doesn't

Comments

[big_twinkie]

damn, jeanine sure is a bitch, yo. :)

i liked this. it's very cute watching them slowly fall in love.

[littlenotebook]

I think she ended up coming out a bit more bitchy than I meant, chalk it up to PMS :-p

[alpha_orionis_v]

The more I see people hating on Janine, the more I want to write a fic where she and Nicholas are happy and getting married and have lots of sex and babies.

[big_twinkie]

but...but what about danny? *lip tremble*

i personally find jeanine sympathetic in the film, but she suffers the wraith of slashers. and they don't set out to make her a bad guy either. its pretty common in romance fiction to make the competition for the hero's heart either a bitch or a total angel.

[alpha_orionis_v]

Oh, god. I have such a soft spot of fics with Nicholas and Janine, and I love this one so much!

I don't have much to say, other than that.

And that Nicholas' "Yes, he is," had me in tears.

[littlenotebook]

*hands you a tissue*

Glad it worked!

[waffleguppies]

Pretty and sweet and clever. I especially like how Nicholas and Danny don't need big speeches to know where they are.

[littlenotebook]

They watch action movies instead

[quoshara]

This made me giggle and then go awwww... *L*

I don't think that Jeannine is actually a bitch (or that you actually portrayed her as being one), I just think she's way more 'high maintenance' than anyone involved with a career police officer can safely be. She needs someone who is strictly M-F, 9-5, and that is soooo not a police officer. She needs to find a nice... chemist or a banker. *LOL*

[random_nexus]

So very much enjoyed this! *big broad grin*
I saw it very clearly in my mind's eye; you did the action and the dialogue quite well.
VERY excellently done.

[littlenotebook]

*blush* Thank you