Ok.. here's the situation.. This man (Jander) has basically been raised with Juniper.. the reason he didn't see her as an option was (i thought it made sense) because she's almost like a sister to him... He was injured during an attack on the base, and given drugs so that he would sleep and heal faster... Miawa is the woman he's interested in.. and she is no way interested in him, and has made that fact quite plain...
Jander had a few strange dreams as he slept. He was running endless hallways, chasing and being chased, never knowing exactly why. As he ran, he could hear things happening down other hallways. Sometimes the sounds were pleasant, like Juniper’s laughter, other times they were frightening like the sounds that the shells made impacting on the ground outside the compound. As he ran, the hallways seemed to be getting darker; the sounds seemed to be getting more horrible. He tried to turn down a different hallway but when he turned the whole world seemed to shift so that he stayed running the original direction. Just as things began to become intolerable he felt a hand touching his shoulder. Jander jolted awake and looked behind him. Juniper was lying behind him and looking at him with extreme concern painting her face. He rolled over in bed and saw that she was sharing his bed. His face flushed and he looked at his pillow
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If they had enough of the "sister" vibe going on I guess I could see it. I don't have a sister. I cant imagine getting along with a girl well most of my life and not spending a good chunk of my teenage years secretly wanting to sleep with her. I'd probobobly be more comfy giving up my virginity to such a person then someone I had to "impress". But if I had a sister I would probobly feel differently, even though I can but boggle at it now. Or maybe I wouldnt. As I say, for me, liking the person alot is the biggest turn on, and I'd much rather sleep with a friend with similar interest whom I like, respect, and have emotional investment in then J random hottie
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So you are looking for what needs to be fixed so that it conforms more to a “male perspective”? Well, sometimes, the close physical presence of an appealing woman might trump any yearning the man feels for someone else ESPECIALLY if the person the man covets has done nothing to return the man’s affections. It is so tempting to say “fuck it” and just do it and deal with the consequences later. If Jander is a soldier in the military then he is probably measuring the “best case” and the “worst case” scenarios in his head. Best case scenario, he has sweet and sweaty sex with Juniper which heals him mentally and physically and he gets to keep her as a friend afterwards with no strings attached. This will allow him to pursue Miawa. Worst case scenario, he doesn’t intimately involved with Juniper which hurts Juniper’s feelings and they cease to become friends.
This obviously plays out in his dreams as you have described. There are a myriad of ways that can be played out with results that are good, bad or both good and bad.
As the_blonde_one said he would, he sent me the link. Now I can't give the male point of view, I struggle with it in writing and role play, but from the writer point of view I have to wonder if Juniper wasn't trying to start something by getting naked with her friend. She isn't comfortable enough with him to find night clothes for him but she'll get in her skivvies? That's just asking for ravishment. That's how if I were writing it I'd have Jander looking at it. He'd be struggling with the sudden, unexpected physical attraction, but I'm not sure he'd be with it enough - based upon your description of the drug haze - to consider the ramifications. If he was with it enough to roll over then I think his dreams would be a confused mash up of eroticism and horror. Eroticism coming from the understandable attraction to his naked bed-mate and horror from whatever led to his accident and the perilous world they seem to live in. I can deffinately see him waking in the morning feeling totally worn out and not the least rested due to his confusing
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He was injured during an attack on the base, and given drugs so that he would sleep and heal faster...
Miawa is the woman he's interested in.. and she is no way interested in him, and has made that fact quite plain...
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This obviously plays out in his dreams as you have described. There are a myriad of ways that can be played out with results that are good, bad or both good and bad.
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