As the_blonde_one said he would, he sent me the link. Now I can't give the male point of view, I struggle with it in writing and role play, but from the writer point of view I have to wonder if Juniper wasn't trying to start something by getting naked with her friend. She isn't comfortable enough with him to find night clothes for him but she'll get in her skivvies? That's just asking for ravishment. That's how if I were writing it I'd have Jander looking at it. He'd be struggling with the sudden, unexpected physical attraction, but I'm not sure he'd be with it enough - based upon your description of the drug haze - to consider the ramifications. If he was with it enough to roll over then I think his dreams would be a confused mash up of eroticism and horror. Eroticism coming from the understandable attraction to his naked bed-mate and horror from whatever led to his accident and the perilous world they seem to live in. I can deffinately see him waking in the morning feeling totally worn out and not the least rested due to his confusing dreams. Would be interested in seeing how you run with the scene and the story as a whole. :)
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