I finished my new song...please comment!

[littleboo84]

I finished my new song, please give me some feedback!!! Thanks!

Tonight I called you on the phone
to see if you still give a damn
but your mind is too far blown
to even know just who I am

I thought we had something real good
something no one else could touch
lets not end this like we could
this friendship always meant so much.

CH: How did we end up this way
when did things start to go wrong?
Was it something I said?
I dont think that I can be strong. (Rept)
(2X) I dont think I can go on

I can't believe I let you slip
into my clean and virgin bed
now those sheets Ill have to strip
what was going through my head?

I should have never let you in
never let you get to me.
tempted by my carnal sin
all I wanted was to be.

CH:How did we end up this way
when did things start to go wrong?
Was it something I said?
I dont think that I can be strong. (Rept)
(2X) I dont think I can go on

I was happy for so long
and it was all because of you
I was your friend you were mine
my feelings were so pure and true.

Without you here right by my side
things don’t seem to feel alright
Why did our two worlds collide
so long my darling and goodnight.

CH: How did we end up this way
when did things start to go wrong?
Was it something I said?
I dont think that I can be strong. (Rept)
(2X) I dont think I can go on