Stay [2/2]

Sep 06, 2011 00:21

Title: Stay (sequel to Suppress)
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Rating: R
Genre: Romance, Drama, Angst
Summary: He would wait for as long as it took until Yunho loved him again.

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angst, story: oneshot, title: stay, romance, yunjae, sequel, au, drama

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little_passions September 5 2011, 16:26:29 UTC
Spot for the lovely and wonderful Mika ♥, who I bothered with my rant about how much I suck at writing summaries. XD I hope you like it! :)

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little_passions September 10 2011, 04:24:26 UTC
XD Thank yooou. OTL This took so long to write, and I'm so happy that you liked it. :3 In a weird way, I felt like I was going through some sort of roller coaster while writing it. XD

But true, Jaejoong was somewhat of an asshole in the last part, probably because it was all in Yunho's POV and no one really anything of what Jaejoong was feeling, so I do agree with you on that. :) I'm glad you though the smut fit the story, gosh, I was so worried about it. XD

I think I suck at being on hiatus-ish though, I keep coming back to LJ and checking stuff. Hahhaa. XD Don't worry, I will do my best to catch up on my beauty sleep. ;)

Thank you very, very, very much for commenting! ♥

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kkogi September 5 2011, 16:39:36 UTC
brb

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kkogi September 5 2011, 16:40:16 UTC
I'm first technically now give me kisses and hugs lol

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kkogi September 5 2011, 18:05:58 UTC
omg alsjksmmsllxldlldldmsla words cannot describe how contented I am that they get back together again
it was a relieved that jaejoong had some sense knocked inside of him. I actually thought he wasn't coming back at the last part
but you're too nice to make yunho suffer again lol
and yunho, nothing else but perfect. excuse me but I'm a yunho stan lol bear with me calling him perfect in every comment OTL
don't worry, I love this okay? oh and I'm gonna follow you on twitter!

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little_passions September 10 2011, 04:26:07 UTC
Of course, LOL, no way would I want to break Yunho's heart again. I'm not that cruel. Hahaha. XD Don't worry, I'm a Yunho stan too, so I feel the same way. :3 I think that's why I write in Jaejoong's POV most of the time, so I can display my Yunho fangirl-ism through Jaejoong. Hahhaa! XD

Thank you for the comment! ♥

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shupashta September 5 2011, 16:41:30 UTC
godness me. I have so many things to do but then, you decide to update, others decide to update, JYJ and Kara's MV are released (or nearly released).

gah!
brb

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shupashta September 7 2011, 19:01:05 UTC
so, years later, I found the time to read this. I suck.

Anyways, I can begin to explain how much my feelings went up and down in a roller coaster fashion while reading this. Seriously, I was hopeful, then happy, then seriously afraid and somewhat disppointed then again, happy.

I thought Jae would not be able to go back to Yunho.
But those two are fated, aren't they x)

and the somewhat smut suited perfectly the general style of the fic ^^
I don't think graphic smut would've done it here, it was all about the feelings ^^

btw, I sent a request on twitter, but I don't go by the same username. On twitter, I'm MsoieM ^^ (so you don't go "WTH" x))

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little_passions September 10 2011, 04:28:44 UTC
LOL, you don't suck. It's okay. XD

Of course they're fated. :3 They'll come back to each other again. I'm happy you thought the somewhat smut was okay because I was really nervous writing it. XD And don't worry, I felt the whole roller coaster thing too while I wrote this, so I guess it works both ways. XD

Thank you for sending a request on twitter, and thank you for the comment! :)

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smexplicit September 5 2011, 16:42:16 UTC
ahh.. been waiting for this. brb! :D

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smexplicit September 7 2011, 18:31:48 UTC
oh jeez, forgot to comment.

anyway, I think everyone has said it all already. It is beautifully written, and flowed wonderfully. The smut scene was perfect, I liked that it wasn't overdone and just fits the mood and phase of the story. You did a great job, as always. Thanks for this. Love it so much!

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little_passions September 10 2011, 04:31:13 UTC
XD I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for thinking the smut was appropriate and perfect for the story, I was really worried about it, so knowing that you feel that way about it makes me happy. :D

Thank you for the comment! ^__^

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jocelle_011 September 5 2011, 16:55:48 UTC
<3 Omg update!

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jocelle_011 September 5 2011, 17:31:21 UTC
OMG they're together! but I have this feeling it doesnt end there ... Idk I'm not really requesting for a sequel but I have a feeling it'll have one. Like something wit Jae's parents.
Thank you for the update bb. I really enjoyed it and thanks for sharing this awesome fic ♥

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little_passions September 10 2011, 04:52:38 UTC
XD I dunno, maybe? But another story to this verse is probably not a priority of mine since I can't really think of anything to add. Maybe? XD

I'm glad you liked it, thank you for the comment! :)

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