an aesthetic question

[gilenaki]

Hi everyone. I have been thinking about a tattoo from the poem "Oread" by H.D., specifically the first line. It ends in an em dash, and I'm trying to decide whether or not to leave the dash in. I like the unfinished sense of it, but it might look weird, I'm not sure.

Your opinions please:

Oread

Whirl up, sea -
Whirl your pointed pines,
Splash your great pines
on our rocks;
Hurl your green over us -
Cover us with your pools of fir.

For font, I want something like this, but stronger, and without the funny a. The placement would be diagonally across the top of my left foot from my ankle to the base of my little toe, facing away from me.


Thanks!!

ETA: dash is staying, and you are all lovely people.