Seeking input...

Oct 21, 2008 11:50

I think I already know how few responses I'm likely to get to this, but I'll ask anyway...

I'm writing the third movement to my first symphony, and I'm stuck. I have a brilliant opening part but the second part (the Trio) leaves me a bit stumped. I come up with various "next part"s, but I'm never sure what sounds best... So I'm asking for advice.

Scherzo - Test #1
Scherzo - Test #2

The opening parts are the same in both, before anyone makes any comments to that effect. It's the last part. What works best? #1 or #2? If you can, please also try to say why you think the way you do?

The comments are screened so there's no cheating, too.
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