its a song

[linkin_verbs]

hey...last night i wrote this song....please comment and tell me if you like it or dislike it and what i can do to fix it at all....ok..here it goes

Comments

[nothinleft2lose]

nice. it just need music to it i think.

[sensesfailten]

dude that is good we just need a riff and were good

[_sweetxkiszez_]

I'm lovin' it.. good work kiddo :D

Hey PherSter!

[anonymous]

I didn't know you wrote... lyrics... or anything, lol... and I didn't know you are already back in RI!!! I totally lost count of the days... they're going by so slow and so fast at the same time.. ahh!! it's crazy-ness!!! but yeah.. it's great that you're back, and we definitely need to see about that shadowing thing.. unless you already have someone to shadow.. tell me and I can try to stalk you!! :-D
love ya
that hot asian chick from RI :-P

Re: Hey PherSter!

[linkin_verbs]

of course im back...and i think im gonna shadow jerermy..but i need some papers signed or something..ok..ttyl

[nothinleft2lose]

Wohoo i have a riff its just the chorus lyrics are a little to long think you can shorten them