its a song

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hey...last night i wrote this song....please comment and tell me if you like it or dislike it and what i can do to fix it at all....ok..here it goes

Sorry but the Dream is Dead

I'm sorry to say but
the dream died yesterday
I never gave up
I always tried
but yet, it still died
The dream was what we shared
It showed that you cared
Now that its dead
So am i
Im giving up
Ready to die

Chorus

As the dream died
A part of me did too
the part that loved you
It was a big part of me
A part that didnt die easily

Along with the dream
that died yesterday
a part of you died
along with me
A part that i knew
Knew very well
information I could not sell
To save mt life
or to save yours
im giving up
im done with you wars

..ok let me know what u think