Friday Night Lights - "If This One Could Be With You", Tim/Julie, R

[lindentree]

Title: If This One Could Be With You - Chapter 6/10
Author: lindentree
Rating: R
Character(s): Tim/Julie
Word Count: 4,046
Summary: After 2x11, "Jumping the Gun", Julie's parents come up with an appropriate punishment for her - tutoring Tim Riggins.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5

Comments

[lindentree]

Thanks, glad you liked that one! Thanks for commenting. :)

[khemlab]

Dude. You are killing me with the tension here. *gnaws fingernails off* Love the dialogue in this chapter, and OMG is tickling the classic high school foreplay.

[lindentree]

I'm glad the tension is good, I wasn't sure whether all the UST was translating enough. It's hard to tell when you're in the midst of writing it, you know?

I can't resist a good tickling scene, it's true.

[__distantstare]

A pause. “I’d probably kill him.”
:] :] :] Such a good line.

I love Tim snooping around her room and failing. Not that I love him failing, just that it's so...him. And it's really cool how the deja vu of his dream came into this chapter.

I agree with the person above me, the tension kills. I actually think that's a good thing. So good. Hopefully you will update soon.

[lindentree]

Not gonna lie, I love faily!Tim. I have an addiction to dream deja vu in fic, even in a universe like FNL where it sort of doesn't make sense. I'm doing it anyway, damn it!

This one's all about the UST so far! :)

[hope_guides_me]

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I want to scream, "JUST KISS HER ALREADY!"

Do continue!

[lindentree]

I know. I'm having some fun with Tim trying to act contrary to his first instincts, which would be to just grab her and kiss her, and to hell with the consequences. We'll see how long that lasts!

[myr_soleil]

Yay update! I miss the show so much, it's great to have something like this to look forward to. Great chapter, although I do feel quite unresolved ;)

[lindentree]

I can't wait for it to start up again, either, and yeah. This is definitely my coping mechanism!