Friday Night Lights - "If This One Could Be With You", Tim/Julie, R

[lindentree]

Title: If This One Could Be With You - Chapter 5/10
Author: lindentree
Rating: R (for the series; this part is just PG)
Character(s): Tim/Julie
Word Count: 3,853
Summary: After 2x11, "Jumping the Gun", Julie's parents come up with an appropriate punishment for her - tutoring Tim Riggins.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4

Comments

[fleurlb]

So much sweet goodness here - even better than having ice cream for dinner. (Which, you know, is the only perk of being a grown-up.) I loved the conversation with Tyra - it was just perfect, could picture it in my head.

[lindentree]

Thank you! There's something about the pairing that just makes me want to end things on a sweet note. Glad you're enjoying the story! :)

[skeeta]

i loved tim calling julie out about her jealousy.

can't wait for the next chapter. great writing, as always.

[lindentree]

Yeah, I don't think poor Julie quite knows what to do with herself, so the green-eyed monster is making an appearance.

Thanks so much - very pleased to hear you like it! :)

[lexiesloan]

I really enjoyed this chapter and I cannot wait for the next one! The last two lines in this chapter were wonderful and made me smile just because I could actually imagine Tim thinking/saying those things.

[lindentree]

I'm writing the next two/three chapters simultaneously, so there's more on the way! Really glad to hear you're enjoying it - thanks for commenting!

[hope_guides_me]

I love it. I love this story so much. :D *encourages*

[lindentree]

Hee! Thanks for the encouragement! Glad you like it. :)

[myr_soleil]

I really like this story and I'm glad you're updating! And this: The thought of anything happening to Julie because he wasn’t around made him sick to his stomach. made me all emotional. Oh, Tim.

[lindentree]

The story's coming together, slowly but surely! I'm really glad you're enjoying it so much, and all your comments are much appreciated! :)