A plug of sorts.
Okay guys, most of you have probably already seen this (from either the LHT or deviant art). It's the short story I'm writing for that contest, and I'm asking for critiques one more time before I polish it off and send it to the contest officials. I've done a bunch of editing since first posting it in DA, and my main concern is: Am I following the "show, not tell" rule? Here is the link. :)
So this past week or so has been pretty uneventful. Señora spent twenty minutes of class today talking about her concussion from a few years ago. All in English. It was very amusing. XD Then I drew a bunch of circles for practice on my worksheet.
Yeah. Boring.
So this past week or so has been pretty uneventful. Señora spent twenty minutes of class today talking about her concussion from a few years ago. All in English. It was very amusing. XD Then I drew a bunch of circles for practice on my worksheet.
Yeah. Boring.