Best. Twist. Ever! I was sure I knew what they were talking about, and that it was probably all in Gene's head as well, but then the last three words... You are awesome!
And you are a wonderful human being! I was so unsure about this that I almost didn't post it, but as soon as your comment popped up I heaved a big sigh of relief to know that the twist worked as I wanted it to and that people actually got it! Thank you so much for the reassurance!
You're very welcome. I was so sure they were talking about Sam's death, possibly in Gene's mind, that the last three words came as such a relief and joy. It was a wonderful little piece, and you should never have worried about it at all.
*makes Stephen Fry join you in the divvy dance of delight*
Yay! I'm thrilled that the twist worked because I really wasn't sure that it did. I shouldn't have doubted, any more than Sam should have doubted Gene's prowess!
Oh dear, I got distracted by the butt-plug and the mincing, and wondered how it could possibly be a white Cortina. I really should read the notes more carefully before I plough straight in to a fic. *headdesk*
‘Bastard.’ ‘Yeah, true. But not what I want to hear. Lol, I laughed out loud here. I could hear the two of them saying this :D
Sorry to have so distracted you, but jolly good to know that you liked this one once you'd recovered from the lack of filth! Now - should I go nurture that other bunny as well????
Dialogue fics allude me. Mary-Sue ahoy! Sorry - I know you mean elude, but it made me sporfle. I might just have to write you into the next dialogue fic... Sam and Gene talk Tat!
I'm horribly jealous of everything that everyone else writes so I spose we all have to realise that we fit into our own particular corners and should make the best of them. So I'm just going to kick you into writing the sort of stuff that only you do best, like what you haven't done for ages!
Hahaha, I can't believe I wrote that! Please don't because I shall die of embarrassment. And you don't want that to happen, do you? Oh, well, at least I made you sporfle. :)
You certainly make the very best of your corner. I'd really like to write something but A2A has destroyed all my LoM plot bunnies. And I've been busy reading the gazillions of fics that were posted here over the past few months. It's an exhausting job, obviously.
A2A has destroyed my bunnies too on the whole, I'm really struggling and this one was totally out of the blue, thought I'd never be able to write Sam/Gene again. All my toys, stamped on.... *is very sad*
Thank you cakey mate - and I love love LOVE your Baywatch on Mars icon. Didn't Phil suggest David Hasselhoff to play the US Gene? Does that make Sam Pamela Anderson?
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I was sure I knew what they were talking about, and that it was probably all in Gene's head as well, but then the last three words...
You are awesome!
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*does divvy dance of delight*
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I was so sure they were talking about Sam's death, possibly in Gene's mind, that the last three words came as such a relief and joy. It was a wonderful little piece, and you should never have worried about it at all.
*makes Stephen Fry join you in the divvy dance of delight*
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Nah - it's teh sexeh with me every time!
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So then I went back to read again, and it all fits - I loved "told yer to yer face"! He so did!
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‘Bastard.’
‘Yeah, true. But not what I want to hear.
Lol, I laughed out loud here. I could hear the two of them saying this :D
Lovely fic. The bunny was worth the nurturing. :)
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I will be very disappointed if you don't ...
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1) Dialogue fics allude me. I just can't master them. How can you put so much character, plot and detail into less than 300 words of dialogue?
2) The twist in the end. Because I can't do those either.
3) I didn't write it.
And, finally - *g*
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Mary-Sue ahoy! Sorry - I know you mean elude, but it made me sporfle. I might just have to write you into the next dialogue fic... Sam and Gene talk Tat!
I'm horribly jealous of everything that everyone else writes so I spose we all have to realise that we fit into our own particular corners and should make the best of them. So I'm just going to kick you into writing the sort of stuff that only you do best, like what you haven't done for ages!
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You certainly make the very best of your corner. I'd really like to write something but A2A has destroyed all my LoM plot bunnies. And I've been busy reading the gazillions of fics that were posted here over the past few months. It's an exhausting job, obviously.
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