I've read two stories at gurabite now and both have irritated me. The one is a good kind of irritation, because it is the author's job to invoke some kind of emotion from the reader, and I'd like to beat the crap out of her OC. (Story is Daisuke by PurpleWolf. I just had to call her out on a few things.) The second irritation is not of the good ( Read more... )