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areader221 November 11 2010, 19:18:53 UTC
Fuck, fuck, fuck! That bastard of yours such a jerk! I already hate DR extremely! He noticed the girls smiling, oh, shit!
Awww, Cara she tried to cover for Dahlia but failed. IDK the young Cara is so precious.
Dahlia is scared, I’m scared too :( Something bad is going to happen.
"Use your fingers," Dahlia pleaded softly, cradling the top of Cara's head into her. "He'll know if he tastes your tongue. I don't want him to hurt you. Please." "I hate when you worry about me." Yes, Dalia should think about herself sometimes. Poor baby girl, DR is inevitable ( ... )

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lexa_red November 11 2010, 23:31:38 UTC
lol OMG I warned you DR would be an awful freak!! <333333
Now you know why I was so obssessed with your DR stories and my incessant questions about him!! I couldn't stop. But you said add darkness *evil snicker*!!! Awwwwwww don't cry (I'm comforting you Dahlia-style) How disgusting is that son of a whore(lol)?? Telling Dahlia all those terrible things and she just takes it? But Cara said do whatever and you know she would. Sex on the dead body...I tried to think of one of the worst things imaginable he could do to her and that was pretty up there...it's almost like he also taunts her sexuality by making her do that ( ... )

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areader221 November 14 2010, 04:00:39 UTC
Your DR is a scary freak and he is awfully mean. I know you struggled to make him to fit into the story. You did a great job! I mean it. He is such an immoral and vicious man I hate him and afraid so much of what else he can do. I applaud you for creating that MONSTER!

I sorta liked seeing Cara that way, all loving and selfless and such. I kinda did a shoutout to GWTW like when Rhett says to Scarlett "I liked to think that Bonnie was you, a little girl again, before the war, and poverty had done things to you. She was so like you, and I could pet her and spoil her, as I wanted to spoil you" Like maybe that's partially why Dahlia likes Kahlan...!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes! That horrible life scarred Cara a lot! Maybe BECAUSE she was so selfless and loving she just took everything what live gave her too hard and totally closed herself even from Dahlia to preserve that little what she was left with. And yes, Kahlan with her love and her broken defiant spirit reminded Dahlia about young broken Cara who still had the remnants of a terrific caring ( ... )

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lexa_red November 14 2010, 06:19:20 UTC
Oh wow, your DR compliments mean alot to me...he totally even scares me somehow. I definitely didn't know that much about him before your "lessons" about him lol. So he's kinda like our DR! It hurt me the most when he said those mean things about Cara's love...what an asshole.

*blush* How amazing is Rhett and his perceptions of things? He completely understood Scarlett IMHO. I look to them alot for inspiration. It's like, after he said that line, it was suddenly all so clear how right he was. I just die for it.

Awww yeah Dahlia really wanted to go that lake dammit!! :D idk she has dreams...

Maybe BECAUSE she was so selfless and loving she just took everything what live gave her too hard and totally closed herself even from Dahlia to preserve that little what she was left with. OMG YES!! So perfect, I can't even...

You don’t tolerate too much fluff Omg so guilty! idk sometimes I wish I was more normal and could get into all the lovey C/K but, oh lol, it's just not me. This is definitely my version of a love story, you're right lol ( ... )

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areader221 November 15 2010, 02:27:18 UTC
I like how you look for inspiration in R/S relations! They are very complicated and terrific! And spot on!

idk sometimes I wish I was more normal and could get into all the lovey C/K but, oh lol, it's just not me. This is definitely my version of a love story. Heee, I like that story better! I'm glad that you are "less normal" :P

btw, I've read a pretty strange but hot fic by lexus_grey where Kahlan is sub (for now) and Cara is not in lovey-dovey love with K but all Mord'Sithy! Fic called "Trained", 2 updates so far. Very short, it'll take a 1/2 hours top to read.

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lexa_red November 15 2010, 06:54:04 UTC
R/S forever!! There's so much to learn from them...

I'm glad that you are "less normal" :P Awwww you're good to me, thanks *hugs*

That fic sounds like exactly like my kinda stuff, definitely gonna read tomorrow, can't wait :D

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